328731 If it helps any, the second part of this story (which is currently in the works) will not contain any watersports. It'll be vanilla sensual sex stuff, the kind you'd read in one of Crowley's fics. I'm not totally depraved.
328733 I'll read it, and I never said all clop is bad. The clop isn't what gave me the No reaction. It's the piss. Sorry if that's not really my kind of thing, but I'll give the story the benifit of the doubt.
Yep, as expected. Strange fetish (but tame on the scale of strange fetishes), but this was great. I love how Vinyl always ends up being some sagely pony and the dj/party-filly
I've enjoyed all of your work so far, keep up the good job.
A soft laugh from Vinyl brings your head to a stop. “I knew it,” she declares with a grin, “You like seeing a mare going to the bathroom, don’t you?”
No. No I do not
Good writing as usual but it's not really my thing. Then again, I've seen worse, my troll friend who I converted to brony status has forwarded me some really disturbing stuff from some clopfic site because he's an asshole
Only thing that seems a bit odd is that the protagonist would dislike the smell of urine if he's into it. Or is Vinyl Scratch supposed to suffer from some weird disease (or diet) that makes her pee smell bad?
432698 It's possible to have a urine kink and not like the smell, just as it's possible to like wetting desperation without enjoying the actual urine. Or you could just go with Vinyl's particular brand being that odorous. Either way works.
Anyways, Part 2 will be done by the end of this week, barring any more distractions.
*reads description*
No
*also reads description*
Ehh....
Fuck it's got my waifu, though. And by timebomb.
Alright, boner. Brace yourself, were going in.
328731
If it helps any, the second part of this story (which is currently in the works) will not contain any watersports. It'll be vanilla sensual sex stuff, the kind you'd read in one of Crowley's fics. I'm not totally depraved.
328733 I'll read it, and I never said all clop is bad. The clop isn't what gave me the No reaction. It's the piss. Sorry if that's not really my kind of thing, but I'll give the story the benifit of the doubt.
i clicked this while writing the desc for a twilight fanfic
cool
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Yep, as expected. Strange fetish (but tame on the scale of strange fetishes), but this was great. I love how Vinyl always ends up being some sagely pony and the dj/party-filly
I've enjoyed all of your work so far, keep up the good job.
Also, this deserves some Vinylception.
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"Clop scene to come"
I see what u did thar
........ Sexy.....
Not my fetish and a bit weird, but I can't say it wasn't written pretty well. Good job, I'm sure those who are into that kind of thing will enjoy it.
NOt really sure what to say here, but I liked the writing. Tracking this one. I look forward to more
This fic made me feel sexy
That is a rather strange fetish and you dedicated a chapter to it? ah well. still tracking.
whoa. Whoa. WHOA WHOA WHOA!
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I suppose this is some wierd-ass fetish I'll never understand.
I'm going to leave now.
I'll admit this is one of my fetishes, and you wrote it beautifully. Very well done, tracking for sure.
328731 "Alright, boner. Brace yourself, we're going in" This is, by far, the best comment I have ever read
Get to right after she starts to piss, read the sentence "like what you see?"
... nope, exit story.
Sorry, im just really not into the whole peeing thing. Didnt think it would be the main bullet point of the story.
*reads description*
Awwww yeah, watersports.
A soft laugh from Vinyl brings your head to a stop. “I knew it,” she declares with a grin, “You like seeing a mare going to the bathroom, don’t you?”
No. No I do not
Good writing as usual but it's not really my thing. Then again, I've seen worse, my troll friend who I converted to brony status has forwarded me some really disturbing stuff from some clopfic site because he's an asshole
....Oookaaay....
I have no objections about trying something new, even if this is really WEIRD!
...but yeah. Not used to this.
Weird, but I have high hopes for the next chapter
Technically spot on, just something that I don't particularly enjoy (to put it mildly)
Obligatory "are you taking the piss"
Plus woo water-sports.
330296 Be thankful to god there's no need for "are you shitting me" pun.
...WHAT THE FCK?
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*reads nick of the poster*
No.
365760 Lol,just my username? I would think that my profile picture would elicit a no more so than the username.
Well finish it!!
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Trying to, but college keeps getting in the way. I'm off class for Good Friday, though, so I'll see if I can wrap it up by Easter weekend.
Great, another terrible clopfic... [Sigh]
*Grabs my wabbajack and my ancient nord helmet*
CHARGE!!!!
why
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whywhy
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Now that's some seriously hot stuff.
Only thing that seems a bit odd is that the protagonist would dislike the smell of urine if he's into it.
Or is Vinyl Scratch supposed to suffer from some weird disease (or diet) that makes her pee smell bad?
432698
It's possible to have a urine kink and not like the smell, just as it's possible to like wetting desperation without enjoying the actual urine. Or you could just go with Vinyl's particular brand being that odorous. Either way works.
Anyways, Part 2 will be done by the end of this week, barring any more distractions.
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>It's possible to have a urine kink and not like the smell
Is this based on personal experience?
'Cause I'm into it, and it seems odd to me.
433225
So, where's chapter 2? Post it pls!
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>white-coated mares tend to significantly out-pee their brethren
wat
Otherwise, this was very well written, despite the theme. I think a thumbs-up is in order.
Hmm...
To read or not to read...
To read or not- oh screw it.
Mind, prepare yourself. We're going in.
"i haved to tinkle" HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA i couldent stop laughing...then i thought it was kinda sexy
1166068 Onward my brother
*Wets pants while reading*
FUCK! Your water sports made me piss!
I'll never understand the piss fetish...
then again this fic is..."interesting..."
432698
Maybe Vinyl ate something that smells bad that affected the scent of her urine like garlic or something.