Well, this was fun.
Not the characters I normally look at for clop, but quite the enjoyable story. Who's going to end up in the herd?

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Well this was a spin off from another story as you can see, so I couldn't use the Mane 6. As for who will be in the herd...

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I didn't expect it to be the Mane 6. I'm just curious about who will end up in it. Hopefully I have some idea who they are when they appear.

As an aside, love that outfit Big Mac prepped for Cheerilee.

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Oh they'll be recognisable characters, I don't plan to use OCs for the herd members though OCs may show up as supporting characters

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I mean 'I hope I actually recognize them'. I don't know that many ponies outside the main cast.

Ooooooh. Interesting!

I rather like the pairing you chose. CheeriMac, I approve of.
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Interestingly enough, I've had Cheerilee picked as one of the mares who'd probably enjoy the idea of a herd. Don't even know why, really, but seeing it here like this reaffirmed it.
The 'master' business is new, though. I'd thought it was something between Spike and Rarity, and spilled over to include Twilight. Well, I think I even prefer your version here. Nothing against the original, of course, but it's even better if it's a general herd thing, heh!

Oh, before I forget: when I first discussed Cheerilee being a proponent of herd relationships with a good friend, he said he could see her try to hook up either the Crusaders or the Rich B*tch Squad with Snips and/or Snails. "So they can keep each other occupied and out of trouble", you know^^

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The master thing is basically just something that the two of them do between each other, it's not going to be a thing for all the members of the herd they bring in.

Also yeah for some reason I got the impression of Cheerilee as someone who would like the idea of a herd and couldn't place why. Oh well.

Also I would not inflict being paired with Snips or Snails even on the Rich Bitch Squad

I love it..its amazing, keep it up

Ooh, CheeriMac, one of my favorite pairings. I will keep an eye on this.

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Come now, they deserve some love as well!^^ They're not that bad, really. Nevermind that, Ursa Minor notwithstanding, they inflicted less destruction on Ponyville than Apple Bloom et al, and less emotional trauma than DT and SS.

If the dom/sub thing is just between Cheerilee and Mac, that's fine as well.

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Thank you both

3717004 your welcome...i cant wait for more

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The dom/sub thing is just one of their little games they play in the bedroom, that will probably expand but I don't think Cheerilee will call anyone else master or mistress, she is still Big Mac's after all

pretty dam close but you lack the meat of the passion and the sex unless this was just a pilot. But still it was nice but we need more meat if you really want to hook the readers and a tad more sex thin just a few measly blow jobs. Again thoe not bad for the first ch

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Didn't want to leap right into the full blown sex scenes right away, little bit of setup first. Next chapter will probably be a bit more explicit and certainly more so after that.

You have got to be kidding me..... First Spike, now Mac? So arguably the two best stallions (Yea, I know Spike's a drake, but for all purposes, he's an honorable stallion too) in Ponyville are getting herds of their own, hmm....

So is this based off of the Weekendverse (Weekend, Dragon's Hoard, Conquest), or is this based off of the spinoff/AU of "Weekend Farmhand for Applejack"?

That makes 5 stories based off Spike finally becoming a drake...in more ways than one.

Edit: I just saw the synopsis. Just correct me if any of it is wrong.

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Pretty much this takes place around the same time as the first chapter of Building a Dragon's Hoard. And to me the idea of stallions having herds isn't actually a new thing it's just not as common among ponies anymore as monogamous relationships became the norm.

Also, you gonna tell me that Big Mac shouldn't get all the mares?

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Never said it was wrong about it It just threw me for a loop a little bit. But then again, considering that Macintosh and Spike are the absolute elite males of Ponyville, I guess it was a matter of time....

Seriously, it seems like some places gets all the luck: Ponyville is home to a princess and a pseudo-prince, the rest of the Elements of Harmony, as well as home to the biggest, strongest stallion in town. Plus it's home to probably the biggest apple enterprise in all of Equestria. And we haven't even got started with some of the more beautiful mares to trot Celestia's lands. It's a wonder whether most of the foals in the next 10 years or so are either gonna be relative to the Apple family, no matter how many times removed, or actually have a bit of draconic blood in them.

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I guess so, but then a whole lot of Spike and Big Mac offspring doesn't sound bad at all to me. After all, best stallion and best dragon!

Though yeah it is a little odd just how many frigging celebrities or otherwise notable ponies seem to live in Ponyville considering it's apparently some backwater town in the eyes of the Canterlot elite, you'd think that would've changed when the Elements bearers were revealed to be living there.

Looking forward to finding out who all will join Big Mac's herd. Since its a spinoff/side story to Path_of_cloud's story it won't have the Mane 6, Zecora or Gilda.

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Not as herd members at least though they might make occasional appearances (besides Gilda). Also hopefully it won't be long before I get the next chapter up.

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We're on roughly the same wavelength then. Bring on the mares!!!

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How about we get it started roughly the same that Spike has to start with? He has a unicorn, an alicorn, two earth ponies, and two pegasi (not counting Gilda or Zecora until it's official)in his herd. So Mac should have roughly the same: two Unicorns, two Pegasi, and two Earth Ponies. Here are some that could show up:
--Cheerilee (that's obvious--She's Mac's marefriend already)
--Flitter and CloudChaser (I love the idea of twins. and they're both pegasi)
--Trixie
--Vinyl and Octavia (unless they happen to live in Canterlot already)

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If you'd like I could send you the current list for the herd and get your thoughts? Helps to have someone to rate your ideas.

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PM me, that way, we don't have to go and spoil it for everyone....

3717183 I was kinda thinking the Spa Twins.

From the comics Big Mac has Fleetfoot of the Wonderbolts and Sweetcream Scoops owner of the local Ice Cream shop after him.

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Ooh! Ooh! Send me the list too! I need to check for Applemac!

Hmm, direct quotation! Anyways, interesting start and it looks pretty good minus a few errors here and there. Bit of a cocktease though

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Like I said I wanted to start off without full blown sex scene in the first chapter, it's just the way I write things. And yeah it's my first time writing a clopfic so odds are good there's a few annoyances here and there, hopefully nothing that's interfering with the ability to enjoy it too much.

3730043 Don't wait too long. For a clopfic it's fine to only have a blow job scene when that's all there is, but it's a little awkward to see that they went further and not have it shown.

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Well next chapter already shows full detail. I just felt that not having a sex scene in the first chapter might help to set up their relationship more clear on an emotional level, though again whether I succeeded or not is another matter

3730156 Oh, I think you'll be okay.