"...I noticed you touching yourself today."

I just feel the rising heat from Scoots cheeks from the next chapter to this one.
Gold!

Dragon

Hmm, quite well handled here, all the curiosity of an adolescent in a camp shower hut. Nice thing is no overtly questionable moments of . Actually looking forward to Dash giving Scoots the Mare-filly talk that Scoot's father probably hasn't found wherewithal to.

Commence read.

Rainbow's rant on cider reminded me of Tweak's Coffee.

Commence read.

A slightly ominous way to end a scene.

Ever get the feeling you should not read this on school internet?

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*AHEM* What is this Mr. Silver, *GASP* Inappropriate material, to the office with you, pony boy!
Yes mister Sheogorath... DUDE! Stop that! You know what that does to me!
Exactly, its fun to watch you squirm!

...Oh crap

"Even if I could leave you here, how wouldd you get down to the ground if something happened?

would
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I don't think Scootaloo would have any trouble getting down from a high place. She may not be able to fly, but she can clearly generate some lift. She should be able to just keep buzzing her wings and glide down to safety. I even think she'd have enough endurance to do that from fairly high up. It's going up that's the problem.

I'm enjoying the story so far! Keep up the good work!

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You’re living on the edge my friend.

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He is man of focus, commitment and sheer f**king will

Fimfiction was blocked at my school but fanfiction.net was not for some reason. Wonder what the history was there.

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How long can she buzz her wings for before getting tired?

The massage continued for a moment, before Rainbow Dash spoke again. "Do you have any adults you spend time with? Like, well, mares?"

"Nah. It's just me and Dad." Scootaloo thought for a moment. "And you, of course!"

"That's what I was afraid of."

"Why? Is something wrong?" Scootaloo asked, her voice tinged with worry.

The rubbing continued. "Scootaloo...”

It was the first time Rainbow Dash had called her by her full name in a long time. Now she knew she was in trouble.

"...I noticed you touching yourself today."

Wow. Dash got pretty serious there.