'Her Warrior Slave'

FUCK

Forget your one year anniversary, get your asshole fucked by your wife.

Make him forget her birthday next!

“...anything?” Cadence asked, perking up slightly.

The a should probably be capitalized.

“Well... What do you do when one of your soldiers steps out of line?”

...Is she going to make him clean toilets and do push-ups?

“Yes, mistress! Yes mistress Cadence!”

You need a comma between the second "Yes" and the second "mistress."

This was outside his comfort zone, but there was little he could do.

Of course he could not do much, there is no safe word. Well, with no safe word, at least it cannot be banana. Why is it always banana?

Bondage play is so fun, I assume. Too bad there is not a Cadence or a Shining Armor ahegao I can reward you with. How about a Twilight ahegao? Adding her to this mix would not be weird at all. I have already favorited and upvoted so, on to the next chapter.

this has become a quest of self discovery

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"Yes mistress Cadence!"
A comma can be construed as a written equivalent of a pause in a sentence. Sometimes, you don't have the luxury of pausing before replying in a bondage session.

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Picking up a collar and the length of faux leather that was attached to it, she silently walked back over to where her sub was.

How can Cadance think of food at a time like this?
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Refering to the characters as "dom" and "sub" within the story felt a little awkward, but other than that, I seriously enjoyed the first chapter.
(Dominatrix has always been a fetish of mine.)

This is really good. I this story. I'm not really a big fan of clop but I this story.

I got halfway through before I said " NOPE NOPE NOPE IM READING HUNGER GAMES NOW"

phew okay where do I begin? the story it self is interesting you put a lot of details in there and you know how to show more than tell but...
FOR. FUCK'S. SAKE
PLOTHOLE!?!?!?
FUCKING ANNOYING THERE IS NO SUCH THING!
PLOT IS NOT PART OF A HORSE'S ANATOMY IT'S A WRITING TERM
A PLOT HOLE IS WHERE A PIECE OF VITAL INFORMATION IN A STORY IS MISSING THAT TIES LOGIC TO IT NOT AN ANUS
i mean, really that killed it for me. there are so many other words you could have used that wouldn't have sound as dumb:
asshole
hole
entrance
canal
i can go on but my point is, there is no such thing. A plot isn't a horse's ass, a plot hole isn't a horse's asshole. learn it. Yes i'm being nit picky about this one thing but it's incredibly annoying. I don't use bunny to describe a girl's boobs, why would you use plot to describe an ass?
this detail doesn't earn the story a thumbs down or anything and I will be reading the second chapter but for the love of celestia and odin STOP.USING.PLOT.

im so fucking wet right now you have no idea. i love BDSM play with my bf and i love to hear him moan as i fuck him with my strap on

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3564345 twilightlicious isn't a word either, silly. We all realize that this is a new use of the word plot, and not true horse anatomy, but we as a fandom accept it as a term because... we like it!

holy hell.

this is so good! why do I like this?

3950796 damn that must feel so good

As A christian, I can only jack off to married couples.
This made my day.

Welp I need a cold shower... or rather a frozen lake.

3564345 a plot is also an amount of land.

I didn't read it. For me, the picture was already good enough for me to upvote this fanfic because I got an instante boner.

I'd like to be Cadence's slave, forever

Yes, Abyss, I will snuggle you if you're actually Filly Sunset Shimmer.

In America, we called No mare mistress, we had freedom and the pursuit of happiness

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I wonder if you’re joking... But if you aren’t, good for you!