The Element of Chaos
By JakeDrake
Chapter 9
Rebirth
Disclaimer: I own nothing, it’s all Hasbro and Lauren Faust's. Enjoy this one. It’s plot heavy, and not that kind of perverted plot. Also, this is kinda short, sorry wanted to get the idea out ASAP.
It was the middle of the mountains outside of Ponyville, deep into the territory of the Diamond dogs walked a small purple pony. She seemed to not know where she was going and just stumbling around looking into caves at random. The pony bounced up some rocks giggling at nothing while the propeller on her hat spun quickly letting her float in the air slowly while looking before gasping and running into one of the caves.
Inside the cave was a large crystal, seeming all that was cloudy except for one bit which was clear enough one could look into the depths of the crystal. The purple pony bounced up and put her hooves on the crystal which shone with magical power, as she looked in she saw a light grey pony with a long swirling horn and two strange wings.
She clapped her hooves and started to knock on the crystal, as if trying to wake the pony inside up. She kept tapping until she heard a small clicking sound, as she looked up she saw a crack in the surface of the crystal. She looked back to the pony inside and tapped again. She watched and heard another crack, and this time she saw the pony inside of the crystal’s eyes open. Each was slightly different sized but both were yellow and orange.
“Don’t worry Daddy, I’ll get you out of there.” The small pony said as she started to hit the crystal harder and harder, making the crack larger and larger. Finally after half an hour of pounding the crystal’s cracks met on the other end, making it quiver and fall to the floor. Shattering it to pieces and leaving the grey alicorn in the middle of the sharp crystals.
The purple pony smiled widely and jumps to the larger pony and said “I told you Daddy, I told you I’d come whenever you needed me.” She gave the larger pony a hug nuzzling him as he stretched his legs and wings.
“Oh I know my little spawn.” The alicorn said smiling licking its sharp teeth and stretching its wings for the first time in ages. The alicorn started to get up and cracked its neck, “I’m just happy you were able to find my old body, foolish princesses thought I wouldn’t have a plan B.”
“I know daddy, your going to show them right? Make it all crazy again right?” the earth pony asked smiling with her strange white ringed eyes. The larger Alicorn smiled and nuzzled the pony with the screw and ball cutie mark.
“Of course, Daddy Discord will always be here for you. We just have to get my full powers back, it won’t take long. I promise you Screwball. Then we’ll rule Equestria again...and have the rest of the Spirits of Equestria bow to my will.” He said smiling evily, “But first, it’s time to get an old friend out of another crystal, and let her swarm take care of the princesses.” Discord said laughing evilly as the cave darkened and only the faint blue glow from the shards of crystal slowly faded.
..... That explains everything!
Also, contrats. You made the featured box.
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Hold on...wait a minute...I DID?! *goes to look* HOT DOG! I DID! TIME TO GET TO WORK, DOUBLE THE SPEED OF MY TYPING!
599341 aaaaaand now its gone I think. The featured box has been going crazy lately. I think they changed the criteria or something.
Edit: Never mind. Just went up to spot 4 from spot 5. HUZZAH
Daddy Discord reference?
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Eeyup. I like daddy discord, a fan of the song itself and the story, plus Screwball is the PERFECT pony to help Discord out. But She won't be the only one. Just wait...you'll learn why a certain Bug hadn't been seen before.
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You won't believe how happy I am. First time people have liked my story this much.
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Sorry, I'm promise that it gets better. My grammar wasn't the best for the first few chapters...
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eh, some aspirin and a few breaks following YouTube links in the comments cleared it up... probably spend a little to much time reading here anyway.
600096 Where else would you read? Books? HA! Internet is better.
I'm sorry, but if you need a proofreader, I'd be happy to help. (spelling and grammar mistakes bother me)
this blows past sins out of the water
Nice way to explain things and keep Discord in the picture.
Soooo, I see that Queen Chrysalis may be coming into the story. Only logical character I could think of that has a swarm.