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Thunderlane or Soarin?
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Try again. Non canon character, so it all depends on whether you have seen the piece of fan art that inspired the idea.
Given him an OC name as well, so that makes it even harder. Introduced next chapter though... huh, 1500 words in and no clop yet.
Yeah, guess how he's going to meet Pip...
Hmm...with the way she said 'oh my' like that, it's someone she would never have expected...
Possibilities...Discord, Blueblood, Dash Sr. (whoever Rainbow's father is), a griffon, Garble, Philomena, OC.
3275815 I had actually considered Blueblood at one point... but I like what I've got so far. After 1500 words with no clop, I needed to add some in, as this is meant to be a clop fic. Not all bondage/bdsm though, will be some vanilla bits.
But yeah, Pip is not going to make a good impression on him.Dash is not related to her in this one... which makes a change for me!
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Wait...are you saying Scoot's real father is going to walk in on them going at it?
3275952 Maybe... sort of... it won't be his fault.
After all, she is kinda SLUTaloo at this point.
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I'm actually enjoying the story here more than the clop.
3275972 Really? Cool, especially as it doesn't really have a plot to drive it. Just trying to give this story some depth.
I mean, yeah, it's got plots, but no plot to follow.
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It feels very episodic. We've got Rarity coming to terms with how far Spike and Sweetie have gone, we've got the Apples dealing with AB and Rumble, we've got Scootaloo's difficult home life and how it's effected her, and now we've got Pip trying to save her from it, along with Luna's help.
Of course, with Pip saying she's his favorite Princess now, I have a sudden mental image of Scootaloo sprouting a horn without warning.
3275984 Heh, that's a reference to one of my favourite series on the site. There's usually something in my stories about them. This one is mainly the couples.
And who do you think told Spike how to please a mare? After they talked about his crush, he told her about the one he had on her sister as well. After a lengthy discussion between the pair and Twilight, he chose to persue the younger mare. It's no wonder that he's kept her with those two giving him pointers.
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Ah, I see. Is that what happened? Interesting.
SOARIN'!
Haven't read next chapter but I guess it's shining armor
Erection lost; chuckles engaged. Seriously might want to think about changing the phrasing there. Bluntly saying anus might be nicer than that.
They make extensions for those? I really wouldn't know because good ol' Alabama passed a law many, many moons ago that makes owning sex toys illegal.
I believe "Ipphh" means "I". If this is the case, she shouldn't be sputtering over the gag. Most monosyllabic words aren't really muffled, especially when they're mostly vowels and don't require certain sounds.
Also, the two tropes I see revolving around Scootaloo are The Good Bad Girl and Son (Daughter in this case) of a Whore, if her mother really did sleep to the near-top.