Have you ever wondered what sex is like for the other gender? I have, and it wasn't until I woke up in the body of a female pony that I had the chance to find out. What started as fun and games, soon escalated into a battle of the sexes.
my bet's on their minds and memories are merging even more. in fact I'd be willing to bet that for a moment there, they truly were one and the same (i pretty much only read the dialogue as I don't come to this site to read erotica...usually )
This is... I don't know. It wasn't really sexy to me... I'm not sure whether this is considered rape or not ;/ Weird. I don't know what it is about this, but it... I don't know, it annoyed me. I don't think I'd do that to Don even if he was being the major asshole that he was. I don't think that he deserved that. Also, I hope you don't keep going in this direction. This is starting to do what bad Five Score divided by score stories do.
3200664>>3200708 I prefer the term "molesterbation." Since Private Moments inspired the word, it is public domain, use it if you want, or not, It does not really matter.
I suppose that there are worse ways to die than to be assimilated into Rainbow Dash's brain after a mind blowing orgasm. Although I do believe that the sex would get darker when another pony is added to the mix, I look forward to it.
...I am a horrible person, and to prove it here is a Fluttershy ahegao. I am ashamed of myself, now. KBO.
seriously, why do i read this stuff! I try to calm my mind with reading so I can write. I choose a subject as far away from my book as possible, and I get this! It was almost like that last book with pinkie...
I get the feeling that the plot (Tee hee!) just got advanced into a very BAD direction! Don completely lost himself in Dash for a moment and is even seeing her dreams now! (Also, he may be gay now (or is he turning bi with a xenophilia fetish?)) Now comes (Tee hee!()) the question of if they will mention that to Twi? Awkward will ensue!
3201993 I dont think they are going to get separated, i think don is going to become 100X more loyal on their trip to the crystal empire. And their personalities will fuse together 100%
3200843 You mean how Dash has sex with everything? Nah, it's not going that way. And it can't really get darker, because Don likes dicks now.
3200958 Oddly fitting. Dude literally looks like a lady. Now, should the musical number start in the middle of cloitis? [Stop it!] "No" [Then I'm gonna have to sing! Dude looks like a laaaaady!] And then Pinkie bursts out of Dash's cooch with a microphone.
3201424 He'll probably piss her off just to get her to do it again, inadvertently losing more of himself.
3201455>>3201654 Dash can mind rape me anytime too, but he has an interesting point. It could be like one of those "careful what you wish for" things where Luna mind rapes a pony, using their own fetishes against them. They would wind up dying erotically in each chapter. Celestia would be furious, trying to figure out why all her ponies are dying...
3201744 Stick to the main family-friendly story and not the clopity side-story.
3201905 Hmm, I guess she did *puts on sunglasses* break her stallion in. awwww yeah!
3201906>>3201943 He'll be a little more objective in the morning. Like "I came so hard I forgot my name / I forgot I hate vegetables! I should be more careful next time, because feeling good isn't worth losing my identity!" Except, Dash/Don is in heat... so he'll have to resist the urge to satisfy himself, knowing it may cost him his life.
If I were him, I'd go one more time, and with Fluttershy Soarin to make it count... just in case it really was the last time.
3201993 Yeah. Perhaps this is how cloppers are made: A month in a horny mare, a lifetime of browing derpibooru.
3202011 The nice thing is that it will be in the main story, it's just handled different. The main story implies he's about to masturbate whether he wants to or not. The next day, Don will get to reflect on the fact that he is disturbed how much he enjoyed it. He's afraid that means he's become a larger part of Dash. So I can convey the same message in the teen story as here. It'll just revolve around a "different" event, such as Don realizing he no longer remembers what kind of car he drives, or his favorite color, or getting whistled at by a stallion and winking at them... Don't worry, though, it'll be reflected in the main story.
32021213202301 Our first two votes for "fusion"? Rainbow Don, Element of Humanity... Well, I can neither confirm nor deny the ending so I'm just going to go pet my pussy ... cat. Pussy cat.
3202319 Thanks it's just.... interesting to try and do so without repeating. I've gotten better at not using the word pussy 50+ times per chapter. But still, there's only so many ways to describe an orgasm. Good thing they are magic ponies, so I can make shit up to make it more entertaining!
3202602 Yes and no if you read through the other comments: Don thoroughly enjoyed it, but he'll realize, or at least fear, losing parts of himself to Dash the more he enjoys it. So it's like a double quarter pounder with cheese now... super tasty, but unhealthy for him. Can he resist? It would be non-con if he tried. Or, if Dash goes "too far" and crosses another boundary. There's still room for us fans of ravishment fantasies.
3202702 In my "700 Follower Special" it happened to Shining and Cadance. It's in my "one shot story compendium" if you want to see 20+ of the most twisted, 500 word sexual scenarios imaginable...
3202755 I almost expected you to say this when I saw the quote:
Not how Dash has sex with everything. This isn't that serious of a story, so it doesn't bother me as much as I thought it would in hindsight, but I always thought it was really weird, and unrealistic, when one gender just immediately accepts it that fast...
I know that if I ever got turned into a girl, it definitely wouldn't happen that fast. I don't know, it's hard to explain... it just feels like he was gay all along or something. I really don't think anyone would adapt that fast to such a shocking change, especially when it deals with something like sexuality.
But again, this is sort of a comedy story, and not that serious, so it doesn't matter.
3203985 Yeah, it would rely heavily with the reader. This chapter was to appeal to the "I wonder what it would feel like..." type people. And, Don does/will have regrets. Anyway, it's a rather ambiguous topic, and Don had no choice but to enjoy it thanks to a certain cocky stunt pony.
And yeah, I try not to read too much into anything or think too much. It was just for fun, and apparently an excuse to buy more Kleenix and hand-lotion.
Yeah, I get what you're saying. It's just something that bothers me because literally every pony transformation story, or a story where a guy gets in a girl pony's body, he just immediately falls in love with the D. And that literally makes 0 sense. Gotta say it annoys me, and its a negative in your story in my opinion, even if your story isn't really that serious.
But your story is still good, and I'm still going to read it. It was just something that I felt I needed to say.
3204223 No, he's not gay. Though, he just got raped while in a female's body by another female and lost part of his identity... that's got to be some kind of mind-raping record.
3204289 I agree with that comment. They often fall in love with dick too fast, though Sigmund Freud believed we all have penis envy and want more penis. In this case Don was really feeling what Dash felt, so it was her love of dick and not his own, because he had lost his own 'identity' at the end of the chapter (temporarily, but that's what I was aiming for at least.)
At least you'll keep reading, so I can redeem myself with the scene where Fluttershy is forced to eat out Dash to "force" Don/Dash to switch places. Or a certain other revenge scene that'll leave Dash scarred for a change.
3204306 he enjoyd the dream of him geting raped by a stallion i think he is gay not that i have a problem with gays but i thout rainbow would end up likeing him the way a mare likes a stallion .....oh wait i just read your second comment that makes sence
3204395 Yeah I suppose I am being too vague for my own good, in the attempt not to "spoil" anything. Don is feeling Dash's strong attraction to stallions. If you're looking for a Don x Dash ship, there's still hope.
That's good then. I don't have anything against gay people, but him going gay that fast wouldn't have made much sense. It's good that you worked it into the thing about them losing their identities instead. That's a lot better.
3203916 Perhaps, but I don't think that Dash is sadistic enough to actually kill ponies (or people) deliberatly. I would be more concerned with matters of timing. It could be extreamly akward to get mind raped in the middle of class, or while kissing your girlfriend/boyfriend.
Dear god, I was going "AAAAAAAAAH" constantly for the first half of this, this is scary. I mean, the sex stuff is ok but it really only heightened the horror of Don being so helpless to resisting, which I knew he wouldn't be able to do due to being in the clop sidestory and he would have to go down without a real "mental breakdown-mind rape" fight since these chapters are clop only and you got to save that content for the main story. Maybe when he is more rational he can have the breakdown he deserves? Why does he deserve it? Because then he goes down with a fight! Or at least we get to see the juicy drama I have been waiting on before they compromise! I hope if so we get Rainbow Dash feeling bad... and that's an understatement.
So...
Would this be considered mind raping...?
~Skeeter The Lurker
3200664
That's a question for wiser men than I.
Wait, Catholisicm exist in Equestria?! Funnily enough, I read a fic a few hours ago where Discord hangs out with Jesus.
3200788
my bet's on their minds and memories are merging even more. in fact I'd be willing to bet that for a moment there, they truly were one and the same (i pretty much only read the dialogue as I don't come to this site to read erotica...usually )
3200788 I think dash is just using pony terminology for something she learned from don's mind.
This is... I don't know. It wasn't really sexy to me... I'm not sure whether this is considered rape or not ;/
Weird. I don't know what it is about this, but it... I don't know, it annoyed me. I don't think I'd do that to Don even if he was being the major asshole that he was. I don't think that he deserved that.
Also, I hope you don't keep going in this direction. This is starting to do what bad Five Score divided by score stories do.
3200664
I'd say it's normal rape, but with added twists.
Mind rape would be something a lot more invasive, if you can imagine that.
Dude looks like a lady
[youtube=http://m.youtube.com/watch?v=nf0oXY4nDxE]
This one time, at band camp...
^It is always the awkward ones.
3200664>>3200708 I prefer the term "molesterbation." Since Private Moments inspired the word, it is public domain, use it if you want, or not, It does not really matter.
I suppose that there are worse ways to die than to be assimilated into Rainbow Dash's brain after a mind blowing orgasm. Although I do believe that the sex would get darker when another pony is added to the mix, I look forward to it.
...I am a horrible person, and to prove it here is a Fluttershy ahegao. I am ashamed of myself, now. KBO.
I'll go ahead and vote for Aerosmith, 3200958.
this round definitely goes to dash, lets see if don can even the score next time heh....
3200869
Dash has a standing invitation to rape my mind. :)
Note to self: Stay out of these chapters.
3201455
Twilight or Luna would be better at that, honestly.
seriously, why do i read this stuff! I try to calm my mind with reading so I can write. I choose a subject as far away from my book as possible, and I get this! It was almost like that last book with pinkie...
Good chapter, just wrong time for me to read it.
Now I have to rethink a good 60% of my life...
Kaidan, you are one fucked up dude. One day, we will have to meet up so we can accurately compare just who is more insane.
"...What the hell is wrong with you monkeys?"
Crypto, you are in the presence of an artist. Be nice.
"...I'm gonna go PK some humans around to clear my mind. Don't come find me."
Yeah yeah, just don't hit any celebrities this time. It was almost impossible cleaning up that media shitstorm.
Don-mind is doomed.
I get the feeling that the plot (Tee hee!) just got advanced into a very BAD direction!
Don completely lost himself in Dash for a moment and is even seeing her dreams now! (Also, he may be gay now (or is he turning bi with a xenophilia fetish?))
Now comes (Tee hee!()) the question of if they will mention that to Twi?
Awkward will ensue!
So if RD and Soarin did it, but Don was present in the back of Dash's mind, would it be a 2 and1/2 way?
Fuck!.......
Don's gonna be extremely screwed up sexually when they finally get separated...
3201993
I dont think they are going to get separated, i think don is going to become 100X more loyal on their trip to the crystal empire. And their personalities will fuse together 100%
So.
Don and Dash are like angler fish of their respective genders.
KA-LINK
You've painted an excellently detailed scene with your words.
Is this the last we'll see of non-con sex? Since Dash now has something Don wants to make him behave.
It's raining gay! Hallelujah, it's raining gay!
3202301 wow....that sucks so bad
3202301 thats..horrible...youre horrible for posting that...oh god am i glad im not an angler fish...just imagine if that happened with humans.
She said "come".
3200818>>3200825>>3200788
^ they are correct.
3200843
You mean how Dash has sex with everything? Nah, it's not going that way. And it can't really get darker, because Don likes dicks now.
3200958
Oddly fitting. Dude literally looks like a lady. Now, should the musical number start in the middle of cloitis? [Stop it!] "No" [Then I'm gonna have to sing! Dude looks like a laaaaady!] And then Pinkie bursts out of Dash's cooch with a microphone.
3201424
He'll probably piss her off just to get her to do it again, inadvertently losing more of himself.
3201455>>3201654
Dash can mind rape me anytime too, but he has an interesting point. It could be like one of those "careful what you wish for" things where Luna mind rapes a pony, using their own fetishes against them. They would wind up dying erotically in each chapter. Celestia would be furious, trying to figure out why all her ponies are dying...
3201744
Stick to the main family-friendly story and not the clopity side-story.
3201905
Hmm, I guess she did
*puts on sunglasses*
break her stallion in.
awwww yeah!
3201906>>3201943
He'll be a little more objective in the morning. Like "I came so hard I forgot my name / I forgot I hate vegetables! I should be more careful next time, because feeling good isn't worth losing my identity!" Except, Dash/Don is in heat... so he'll have to resist the urge to satisfy himself, knowing it may cost him his life.
If I were him, I'd go one more time, and with
FluttershySoarin to make it count... just in case it really was the last time.3201961
Two and a half Orgasms, only on the hub!
tfwiki.net/mediawiki/images2/thumb/2/25/Only_on_the_Hub.jpg/300px-Only_on_the_Hub.jpg
3201993
Yeah. Perhaps this is how cloppers are made: A month in a horny mare, a lifetime of browing derpibooru.
3202011
The nice thing is that it will be in the main story, it's just handled different. The main story implies he's about to masturbate whether he wants to or not. The next day, Don will get to reflect on the fact that he is disturbed how much he enjoyed it. He's afraid that means he's become a larger part of Dash. So I can convey the same message in the teen story as here. It'll just revolve around a "different" event, such as Don realizing he no longer remembers what kind of car he drives, or his favorite color, or getting whistled at by a stallion and winking at them... Don't worry, though, it'll be reflected in the main story.
3202121 3202301
Our first two votes for "fusion"? Rainbow Don, Element of Humanity... Well, I can neither confirm nor deny the ending so I'm just going to go pet my pussy ... cat. Pussy cat.
3202319
Thanks it's just.... interesting to try and do so without repeating. I've gotten better at not using the word pussy 50+ times per chapter. But still, there's only so many ways to describe an orgasm. Good thing they are magic ponies, so I can make shit up to make it more entertaining!
3203916
Im ok with the story line, it's just I was about to get some writing down for the night
3202602
Yes and no if you read through the other comments: Don thoroughly enjoyed it, but he'll realize, or at least fear, losing parts of himself to Dash the more he enjoys it. So it's like a double quarter pounder with cheese now... super tasty, but unhealthy for him. Can he resist? It would be non-con if he tried. Or, if Dash goes "too far" and crosses another boundary. There's still room for us fans of ravishment fantasies.
3202624
It's raining AWESOME!
3202702
In my "700 Follower Special" it happened to Shining and Cadance. It's in my "one shot story compendium" if you want to see 20+ of the most twisted, 500 word sexual scenarios imaginable...
3202755
I almost expected you to say this when I saw the quote:
*cum
3203916
Not how Dash has sex with everything. This isn't that serious of a story, so it doesn't bother me as much as I thought it would in hindsight, but I always thought it was really weird, and unrealistic, when one gender just immediately accepts it that fast...
I know that if I ever got turned into a girl, it definitely wouldn't happen that fast. I don't know, it's hard to explain... it just feels like he was gay all along or something. I really don't think anyone would adapt that fast to such a shocking change, especially when it deals with something like sexuality.
But again, this is sort of a comedy story, and not that serious, so it doesn't matter.
3203985
Yeah, it would rely heavily with the reader. This chapter was to appeal to the "I wonder what it would feel like..." type people. And, Don does/will have regrets. Anyway, it's a rather ambiguous topic, and Don had no choice but to enjoy it thanks to a certain cocky stunt pony.
And yeah, I try not to read too much into anything or think too much. It was just for fun, and apparently an excuse to buy more Kleenix and hand-lotion.
3203944
It's an observation, not a vote. If they fuse then they won't be able to bicker, right? Why bother reading if they're not going to bicker, right?
wait he is gay?
3204118
Yeah, I get what you're saying. It's just something that bothers me because literally every pony transformation story, or a story where a guy gets in a girl pony's body, he just immediately falls in love with the D. And that literally makes 0 sense. Gotta say it annoys me, and its a negative in your story in my opinion, even if your story isn't really that serious.
But your story is still good, and I'm still going to read it. It was just something that I felt I needed to say.
3204223
No, he's not gay. Though, he just got raped while in a female's body by another female and lost part of his identity... that's got to be some kind of mind-raping record.
3204289
I agree with that comment. They often fall in love with dick too fast, though Sigmund Freud believed we all have penis envy and want more penis. In this case Don was really feeling what Dash felt, so it was her love of dick and not his own, because he had lost his own 'identity' at the end of the chapter (temporarily, but that's what I was aiming for at least.)
At least you'll keep reading, so I can redeem myself with the scene where Fluttershy is forced to eat out Dash to "force" Don/Dash to switch places. Or a certain other revenge scene that'll leave Dash scarred for a change.
3204306
But...but... Poor Fluttershy.
ETA?
3204306 he enjoyd the dream of him geting raped by a stallion i think he is gay not that i have a problem with gays but i thout rainbow would end up likeing him the way a mare likes a stallion .....oh wait i just read your second comment that makes sence
In the authors notes for this chapter, You claim to be insane. If you truly are, then you may have what it takes to join my group
Insanity
3204395
Yeah I suppose I am being too vague for my own good, in the attempt not to "spoil" anything. Don is feeling Dash's strong attraction to stallions. If you're looking for a Don x Dash ship, there's still hope.
3204306
That's good then. I don't have anything against gay people, but him going gay that fast wouldn't have made much sense. It's good that you worked it into the thing about them losing their identities instead. That's a lot better.
3203916
Perhaps, but I don't think that Dash is sadistic enough to actually kill ponies (or people) deliberatly. I would be more concerned with matters of timing. It could be extreamly akward to get mind raped in the middle of class, or while kissing your girlfriend/boyfriend.
Dick in a Box, Jizz in my pants, I just had sex, and 3-way (the golden rule) all by the lonely island
Dear god, I was going "AAAAAAAAAH" constantly for the first half of this, this is scary. I mean, the sex stuff is ok but it really only heightened the horror of Don being so helpless to resisting, which I knew he wouldn't be able to do due to being in the clop sidestory and he would have to go down without a real "mental breakdown-mind rape" fight since these chapters are clop only and you got to save that content for the main story. Maybe when he is more rational he can have the breakdown he deserves? Why does he deserve it? Because then he goes down with a fight! Or at least we get to see the juicy drama I have been waiting on before they compromise! I hope if so we get Rainbow Dash feeling bad... and that's an understatement.
3204306 mind-rape? PUNS!!!! That is all.
I'm literally gasping for air from laughing
3204439 cool