Warning! This story isn't very loyal to the Superman lore! Deal with it!
On what should have been another normal night for the royal sisters turned out to be a life changing one, a strange machine lands right in the bedroom of princess Luna, it is first taken as an attack from somepony in space but after being closely inspected by princess Luna she discovers that something they never expected is inside!
They open it to reveal what princess Luna has always wished for. What is it?
If you honestly can't guess for yourself here's a little hint
It represents Truth, Justice, and the Equestrian way!
But it is sent to Ponyville to learn Truth, Justice, and the Equestrian way!
When it realizes that it posses this kind of power it feels the need to put on a cape and protect others with it's life, much to Luna's reluctance.
This is Super-Stallion, the Stallion of Steel, and this is his story
Wait a minute.
That was pretty good, I like where this is going. There are a few errors you could fix in there, and if you need any help, I can help you with it. Thumbs up.
Well how can this Superpony learn the ways of being a hard-worker, kind and gentle, right time to show force and all that jazz when he's living the top class lifestyle there is?
its ok
Please continue this story, I'm liking it allot
Don't be afraid to continue this. It could actually go somewhere. We've only scratched the surface of his origin. It's bound to get much better if you try.
So... could this be Comet?
Ether way, I like the story.
Please continue.
Hello I was wondering when will this storage next chapter uploaded I have Reddit it's awesome please let me know when you see this