The start of the fellowship were zebra, pony and changeling I mean 3/4 of one. work as one to have one solid goal the down fall of the queens I can wait for the next
There are way too many errors in this you need to go over it and fix those I mean you put most slowest in there that's exactly what you aren't supposed to do its either slowest or most slow not both. So go back and fix stuff.
Good plot progress but I suggest getting this edited. It needs it bad.
love the update, also just wanted to know if these where errors
armor
rare
Doctor love.... Returns..... Aw this gonna be funny as hell
Average chapter, full of errors, author that doesn't care, nothing new here.
The start of the fellowship were zebra, pony and changeling I mean 3/4 of one. work as one to have one solid goal the down fall of the queens I can wait for the next
You can not Rush rushing is for Russians
And the comedic releif is inbound.
There are way too many errors in this you need to go over it and fix those I mean you put most slowest in there that's exactly what you aren't supposed to do its either slowest or most slow not both. So go back and fix stuff.
Please more.
The one, the only, lovey-dovey. Ow. What is this? A pebble with the word no on it?
Doctor Lo~ove!
Lovey Dovey's back!
*SMACK!* Ouch! *looks down at the rock: I fucking told you NO!*
7 months later.....................
4264218 dont worry update soon