I really liked this.
Glad you're back, my friend. I'll be keeping an eye on this fic.

I'll read but only because The Obly Thing Better than Flying was like the best abiotic ever so even though I usually don't read horror I'll give this a chance.

It's like creepy pasta, without the pasta

Dash should know the rules of Horror, as I like to call: Horror 101:
-Creepy house
-Middle of nowhere
-Dead of the night
-Heard a scream.

This has #NOPE written all over it.

Can't wait for more!

I Luv luv luv it!

3017196 Glad to be back, man!

3018316 Yeah, Rainbow can definitely be a little headstrong.

3018044 Without the pasta? I'm afraid I don't get it...

Things are going great for chapter two. It'll probably be up day after tomorrow!

3020840 take the word pasta out of [icreepy pasta

3021643 Oh, haha I feel dumb. I just though the pasta in Creepypasta had some sort of meaning.

This is... Well.. It's kinda weak...

Not to be rude... But you got a bunch a build up to... A scream.

Now, maybe the next chapter will be better, so I'll read it before deciding...

~Skeeter The Lurker

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Dude this is the first chapter! You can´t just go all in right at the beginning.
Oh i´m looking forward to review the hell out of this =)