Well so far this isn't as scary as my first horror story but that was Cupcakes,but if the other chapters are just as creepy it will definitely surpass it in every way.
3037302 Well, I'm sorry you feel that way. I meant for the pacing to be slow in the first chapter, as this isn't exactly just a quick read. Its in progress. I suppose I do need to add the gore tag, and looking at the scene in the house I'll add the sex tag. I don't really mind being rejected, though.
3037636 Perhaps I'll resubmit it after I get more chapters in. I'm not going to lie, I was slightly offended at first. (I'm barely into the story, and the whole pacing complaint seemed to reference the story as a whole.) But I know you're just doing your duty as an admin of the group. I'll probably resubmit it at a later time.
I'm scared. No really, I feel fear. More intense than when I play Amneia and allow myself to become submerged within the story and stuff. I'm not a fan of horror movies. I don't enjoy playing games like Amnesia, but I get this feeling that I must, if onlt to allow myself to experience things like it. And horror stories... having a wild imagination and a strong empathy towards almost everything is not an advantage. I'll say, well done, I'm almost crying tears of fear, well done.
Well so far this isn't as scary as my first horror story but that was Cupcakes,but if the other chapters are just as creepy it will definitely surpass it in every way.
This should be a horror game....
'The house
A MLP based horror game'
C'MON PEOPLE
I took a look and a read, and was forced to reject from Twilight's Library.
For the details, check right here.
Don't feel bad, though! You can always resubmit if you do the suggestions.
~Skeeter The Lurker
3037302 Well, I'm sorry you feel that way. I meant for the pacing to be slow in the first chapter, as this isn't exactly just a quick read. Its in progress. I suppose I do need to add the gore tag, and looking at the scene in the house I'll add the sex tag. I don't really mind being rejected, though.
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Don't take it too badly... Like I said, it can always be resubmitted.
~Skeeter The Lurker
3037636 Perhaps I'll resubmit it after I get more chapters in. I'm not going to lie, I was slightly offended at first. (I'm barely into the story, and the whole pacing complaint seemed to reference the story as a whole.) But I know you're just doing your duty as an admin of the group. I'll probably resubmit it at a later time.
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We'll be awaiting it.
~Skeeter The Lurker
I have two words for that house.
Fuck and that.
I love it.
now i think this is very fiting to listen to while reading the begining of the chapter
I'm scared. No really, I feel fear. More intense than when I play Amneia and allow myself to become submerged within the story and stuff. I'm not a fan of horror movies. I don't enjoy playing games like Amnesia, but I get this feeling that I must, if onlt to allow myself to experience things like it. And horror stories... having a wild imagination and a strong empathy towards almost everything is not an advantage. I'll say, well done, I'm almost crying tears of fear, well done.
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oh my god, i can feel the horror, and as i was reading i thought i heard a door creak shut in my house