A sixteen year old kid is hunted and shot, left for dead in a forest next to a small town, when suddenly six young, beautiful girls appear from nowhere and helps him. Now he awakes in a strange land, surrounded by anthropomorphized ponies. OC HiE.
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interesting start.
Keep it up
2648674 Thank you good sir. I've been getting help from friends on this site, so I should give them some credit.
Intresting premise. Hope you keep it up man/woman/pony/( other organism/inanimate being)
2648969 Thank you for the support, good sir! You find any problems with my writing, you drive the metaphorical dagger into my back and make sure I fix it quickly.
Not a bad start and sounds interesting.
Keep writing.
2649492 Definitely will. I hope that you stick with this story all the way through. Might be able to put the first chapter up tonight, if I can. If not, early tomorrow morning.
I LOVE IT.
2649512 That's good. Next chapter coming up soon, so keep in touch.
it seems kinda far fetched that twilight just decides she wants to see a human and travels into another universe to see them, that's just OP as balls... but i'm glad you didn't just decide to pop him up in the everfree forest like every HiE EVER
and also,
it's supposed to be Golden oaks library
It Was Unanimously Agreed
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Agreed. Why can't any of that shit ever happen in Whitetail Wood?
3441096 Because some over powered Gary stu has to use his 'new found powers' to kill timberwolfs or a manticore or some shit.
P.S. Twilight is overpowered as fuck. Hopping deminsions like that.
Read first chapter and I already likre it!
Damn it Rainbow. Can't you see he's bleeding.
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RAINBOW YOU DUMBASS
Wow rainbow, dick.
Good start so far, totally thought that they would all be starting in a human like world with the mane 6 being human already, and not transported into the human world.
Right I don't care im going to pretend that Daniel is actually called Hayate
And he is wearing a Butler suit
Punches a mafia boss kid you got balls of steel
Is rainbow really that blind?
Rainbow dash: Hey look guys there's a guy bleeding to death is he dangerous?
Me: Oh yeah he's totally dangerous
5648614 you sir, win all the point
5716252 shes done worse in fanfics
I think you mean hairless. Skinless humans are a bit of an oddity.
Italian Mafia, or Irish Mob? Probably Italian, but you never know.