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Holy hell next chapter please.

well now you got me hooked,

probably the 2nd story i read of shining being twi's dad. can't remember where i found the first though.

*reads last line*

okay, by the set up some things might come to mind

1. Twilight is sitting there waiting for him
2. Cadence set some stuff up so they can do the mambo again
3. Cadence heard the news somehow
4. Cadence is caught cheating (with either A, some random stallion or B, his own father.)

MOAR MOAR MOAR!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1

I can just imagine cadence going bat shit crazy and like fucking destroying shining. That would be, intresting.

"Good news everypony! we have just invented the gun, and have given Twilight the first one and she will be testing it to-. Wait, what? She's gone off the deep end? and is looking for Shining Armor? Oh, dear... this can't end well." Said Celestia to all of Equestria

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Or C, Twilight.

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5: What's left of Cadance. That Dark tag has me scared, boys and girls. Very scared.

I'm fine with this fic so long as Shining and Twilight don't do it. That's double incest. Will read latter, but only if that doesn't happen. If that is warn me now so I can back away. I like the bond Shining and Twilight share, but not like that.

Edit: That's why this fic makes me curious. I wonder how that bond would be if he was also her father.

Well I can declare shit just hit the fan.

I aint seen a cliffhanger that big since halo 2

2617618 Warned

Because.... Computers don't make mistakes?
Like, I'm honestly expecting it to turn out that the freezing meant an error in the system.