During a titan attack of the district of Trost, six magical, talking ponies mysteriously appear behind the city walls. After learning the abilities of the ponies, the Military allows them to fight alongside them in a desperate bid to save humanity.
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So you writte a new chapter after they release a new chapter each week?
ooo. So he didn't use OP Sparkle and went with the original plan. Okay, let's see how that fares.
This story is amazing I love it and hope it continues on further
2631769 Well, by the very rules the author set for this story, Twilight is significantly weakened, and probably can't use things much more powerful than her teleport and TK.
Good to see that general magic will be toned down in this story. Not much to say as I'm still pensive on what I actually think and Ill leave it for a few chapters in, maybe.
Well forelegs instead of arms would be good.
Well. Not bad chapter anyway. Only thing which makes me cringe a little is that ponies seem a little too unaffected by what is going on. I can understand that they are a little less affected since there are buthered some strange creatures looking like nothing in their homeland but still... they come from a more peaceful world where all of villains they faced didn't actually murdered anyone or caused slaughter of such level like titans do. Maybe it's just adrenaline?
Oh, on the other hand, when all this stress and adrenaline end I'm curious how soldiers are going to act...and how fast Twi and c.o will be get out from dungeon(remember Eren. He was in dungeon as well, ponies are compeletly mistery so govermnent is not going to trust them or let them do stuff like that.)
I know I'm way behind, but I would find it rather amusing if they tried making Spike huge again for a sort of Godzilla fight.
3855834 Uh, yeah. They really are called arms.
DAMMIT RARITY!!!! KEEP YOUR EYES ON TARGET!! I know its a horrifying experience but before you missed your shot the titans were ignoring you as promised.
Wait, if the titans were ignoring the ponies, then why didn't Twilight and Rarity just go down there walk passed all titans get some of the gas and then teleport back? Also who thinks it'd be awesome to see a titan from Titan Fall helping them.
4147313 Like Jean said, that still doesn't solve the problem of there being titans in the supply room.
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Way late to the conversation but why not have Twilight and Rarity get the gas, then have the all the soldiers with full gas swarm them? Armin and Twilight are supposed to be smart, so getting all possible advantages and then attacking seems like the most basic plan.
Your Show and Tell is not balanced- too much "tell", not enough "show". Also, ease off on the Lavender Unicorn Syndrome.
trust rarity to fuck it up
I thought titans only attacked humans and not ponies or other animals
3968537 no they aren't, they're called fore legs.(not sure about my spelling though.)
Oh! Each have a relation to a pony! Sasha must be Generosity!
Despite the potato thing.
Did they save anyone who was killed in the original show timeline? There should be an Authors' Note at the end of each chapter of who were supposed have died and when. Some might have had skills that would have been better used in other situations later on.
trust Rarity the-sorry to say this- snob to failed the plan.