During a titan attack of the district of Trost, six magical, talking ponies mysteriously appear behind the city walls. After learning the abilities of the ponies, the Military allows them to fight alongside them in a desperate bid to save humanity.
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I really hope Titans tend to ignore SENTIENT TALKING wild life...
Eh dunno how I feel about RD. I mean, Celestia just send them there and hope friendship will triumph, not even bothering to think they may not even speak the same tongue or and RD just acts rash again... Jean was right to act the way he did, and personally I don´t like how one pony someone is better than a trained soldier...
3135869 RD is an extremely well trained athlete from what I know (I sadly haven't seen the entire show yet), to the point she's probably the best outright physical fighter among the mane 6 as far as skill goes (AJ is probably still stronger though, just because she's an earth pony), so it makes SENSE that she can take down a trained fighter, especially when they're caught by surprise.
3240740No, I'm pretty sure applejack is the best fighter.
Rainbow dash's abilities are going fast, and being rash.
Why was Spike seriously left out for the most part in this chapter?
This follows the anime and manga sooo well. God bless the author and may eren give you titan powers.
What we need now is a riot cannon(pinkie party cannon+bass cannon)!!!
The first chapter was done pretty well I must admit with proper pacing at the like. Second chapter just as well done. Though the only eye roll moment out of this chapter was the typical brand of brash Rainbow Dash.
Now keep in mind I never watched Attack on titan so I don't know how well trained these soldiers typically are but for rainbow dash to incapacitate a trained soldier with moves that sound like she had training of any kind I just can't help my own actions toward the moment afterwards.
If anyone was to use martial arts of any kind it would be Rarity (surprisingly.) As its shown quite of few times of her knowing any form of fighting *with using no magic*
Sure RD is an athlete but does that attest to specific training? No it doesn't. She's the equivalent of a marathon runner and an Olympic sprinter at full speed. And honestly do you think someone of that nature can take down a soldier?
AJ is definitely the strongest out of all the mane6 but its pretty evident shes just a brawler using her strength to her advantage, power with little direction. (which can be easily swayed)
Hopefully this story doesn't turn to be humans lack so and so and we ponies can provide! kinda schtick cause that line of stories gets old really fast.
So thats my 2 cents on that little matter other then that, first contact went a little better then I expected.
Perhaps next time.
Well off to the next chapter.
3902211 They are trainer in melee fight but with humanoids. Besides they are nothing more as rookies, they don't have experience in any real battle. So I don't see much problem with RD taking care of one of them at this point.
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If they REALLY wanted to save the day, they'd have sent a whole darn army. they're brave, but as Attack on Titan informs you time and time again, bravery simply isn't enough.
Pretty good, however there is one glaring problem. This fic has intense amounts of Lavender Unicorn Syndrome. I mean, I know that you are trying to introduce the characters, but if you want to do it that way you have to have a name-drop in like the second line of dialog. Other than that, it is fanfiction, assuming that the audience already knows the characters' names won't kill you,
4126850 Seconded. We're on an MLP fanfiction site; i think it's safe to say we know the names of the ponies. The characters from AoT, those are okay to introduce, because some of their names are pretty obscure; however, I'm pretty sure we all know who Pinkie Pie is.
No,.
Eren...died?
Eee! Great chapter! Props on that! God same this is a great fic so far!
love the straight up dominance of twilight has em saluting at first contact
*Reads chapter title* "Mourning in ponyville shimmers, mourning in ponyville shines!~"
3902211 As previously mentioned, RD is a black belt in karate. She would have some fighting prowess.
Well, I can't read this. I just realised that this is going to be one of those stories where the Mane six, and spike, are just tag-alongs that don't actually affect anything, only the illusion of it. What's the point of this if everything would happen the same way without the ponies? How else could it be if you are following the manga? The writing is good though, I'll give it that.
Ah, I hear "A Slap on Titan" voices!
5731872 Yeah it might be one of those stories but they might actually have a profound impact on what happens.
The fact is that no matter what species you are, pissing off Titans is a extremely bad idea! They don't even need to eat them, they could just as easily crush them or kick them aside like the other horses in the show.
I can practically hear Rarity going "GoWAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!!!!"
6739548 Can't pinkie pie just go god mode because she can do anything unless magic fuels her randomness then they fucked
the fact that it might as come from a little girl, and the soldiers would NOT, have been scared that easily
why would she even want to do that, they were sent here to help, not make an idiot of themselves