I have a Nephew who didn't stop wetting the bed until he was 10 strange boy he is.....

Quite an intresting set up so far.

Nice to see some Scootalove.

Wait wait wait! Why did you put this fic in the Dash-Idol/Mentor/Sister group and the Non-Dash group??

>Warning: may contain bedwetting, diaper use and age regression.
>may contain bedwetting
>may
>Implying it was ever not a foregone conclusion that such would come to pass

It's, like, why even bother saying that? As if the reader couldn't figure that out from the synopsis and blinkin' picture.

Writing isn't horrible, but it's very dry and lacks style. Boring, in other words. Your formatting is wonky, with you moving from nice, evenly spaced paragraphs to a minor wall'o'text during Scootaloo and her aunt's conversation. Each speaker should get their own paragraph and the formatting needs to remain consistent.

2572906 It was intended as a pun, and a bit of world building. I'm not sure if the Ponyville schoolhouse even has a gym, but there's lots of room outside for calesthenics :)

2572121 thanks for the feedback.

I definately need to sharpen up my formatting of dialogue; I will work on getting this right in future.

I'm expecting the story to get wetter as it goes on, but I'll try and work on my prose as well.

P.S. story may also contain traces of nuts.

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You do realize you can respond to multiple people in the same comment, right?

>I'm expecting the story to get wetter as it goes on

>P.S. story may also contain traces of nuts.

I... what?

Interesting, I see you have grammar error (even how BAD I am) but not bad

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Nope, I had no idea, but that makes sense. Thanks for the tip.

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Dunno. It wasn't me who added them. Dash will be appearing in future chapters though, so someone is bound to remove it from the Non-Dash folder when that happens.

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Welcome.

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>Interesting, I see you have grammar error (even how BAD I am) but not bad
>Dat grammar
>Dat punctuation
>Dat emphasis
>Dat syntax
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'Nuff said.

2575079 well whoever added this to the Scootaloo group was retarded

2575363 I don't massively care about any of those things unless if I'm trying to impress or make a fic, then I make it as perfect I can (even if it's far from it)

This is a very cute idea, MOAR!

Cute stuff but:

The last period for the day was gymkhana, and Scootaloo made up for her earlier inattention by applying herself exta hard, excercising on the wing trainer machine.

Gymkhana?

MOAR!

2578207 What do I look like, a dictionary? :)

http://dictionary.reference.com/browse/gymkhana

It's a pun, so shoot me.

2580401 Haha my apologies.

2580414 no worries ^_^

I just noticed something. Unless you plan on this story having hardcore 'Adult Baby' related events, then the mature tag is not really necessary.

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It is going to feature some AB related stuff in later chapters. Not anything I'd term hardcore myself, but I'd rather forwarn people than have them complain about it later :P

Fair enough, also you earned a watch and a fave. I just realized that no one is really paying attention to the stories I fave or not 2584479

2586004 Thanks!

We are interested in thy story. An issue many fillys and colts deal with and thou writes with great sympathy for the issue. Thou hast been favourited and We await thy next update eagerly.

didn't expect scoots to have an aunt, but glad she's not all on her own.

since this isn't gonna be a scootadption fic, I've no real clue where its going, but looking forward to finding out

quite an adorable start to this story