Fairly well written, with very few spelling errors. Good job.

I just....I don't....what is this? It was so well written though, but i'm caught between the feelings of and

Unless this is a humanized story you should not be using the human tag. If it is you should say so in the description..

2566243 well they are humans only with the same skin color as in the show, no tails or hoof legs. I would sa that qualifies as human.

Mrs. Cake clop... Guess I'm favoriting this.

Yum!
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dem ass's!

2566356
Okay then. Say that they are humanized in the description.

"I can't wait to help out Pumpkin Cake with Father's Day already," Pinkie giggled.

Do I detect a sequel?

2567371 I haven't planned it.

Dang. Sexy and sweet at the same time

Is it just me, or are most Mother's Day fics turning out to be clopfics?

2567473 seems that way there was someone who asked if there was someone going to write a mother’s day clop and I think a lot of writers jumped on that train, me included.

I enjoyed proofreading this and was glad to help. Looks like I missed a few things though... Sorry.

But still:

Humanized stories do not belong in the anthro group. Please remove it.

*Flails arms*

WHAT THE FUCK HAPPENED TO THE SFW THUMBNAILS RULE!!??

We need a Father's Day sequel.

holy shit . . . whaaaaa!?

Love it!

2568593 it has the tagline mature and sex, isn't that enough?

2568124 from which group does this come from?

2569841
Do you mean what group it was added in, or what group it should go to?

2569864 Okay, I've got it figured out. It must have been someone else adding it, but its gone now.

2570716
Okay then.

2566662

Indeed

Wow,

22sonic did a great job on that cover pic

lol

I laughed

It felt rushed. But good regardless. Thumbs up! Hot hot hot!

One word: LAWL!!!!!!!

Last comment was not meant to hurt, just so u no

great fucking story.

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gods, the thought of pinkie pie in a thong. HNNNGG

Carrot Cake is my fetish...
For the love of Celestia make a sequel of father's day!!!!

2636446 I am kinda wrapped up with other stories, but a handful of people have asked for a father's day sequel so I guess I should start workjn on that.

2636446 Say, would you like to be sort of a co-writer/editor?

2646441 Sure, why not.

This was quite steamy well done!:)

:D

Eck, incest. Reminds me of CopperCab and how he told everyone about his first time.

3186919
Who?