Not done with it yet, but I'd like a bit of feedback from you guys on how it's going so far.
Elizabeth Waters stifled a yawn, glancing up from her computer’s monitor, then at the digital clock hanging on the wall.
“Hm.” She snorted, folding her arms, “Lunch break already.”
I'm just barely beginning to write the prologue, but in order to really make things work, I'll have to change your character's occupation, Wrought-Iron.
Elizabeth Waters, instead of working at home in shipping logistics, is instead working at the company TechSIG as a company logistics/HR department manager. She'll still have mechanical skill that may end up playing a more crucial role later on.
...definitely. 
I was once told that my generation would change the world. I've done my part since then, and now it's your turn.
Tweaking the plot to accommodate the announced character roles, the story will now be somewhat reminiscent of the original story, with a core cast of characters working at TechSIG (the fictional company that licenses the simulations) and a secondary cast of characters who either are directly associated with the simulations, or come from one themselves.
This is the basic plot I have so far for a prologue, which already pulls in the top four characters on the role sheet I posted earlier on.
After reviewing the list of characters, I've organized them into roles based on how much legible information was provided (personality, backstory, etc) and personality. Here is the list down below:
Main Character: Elizabeth Waters (Wrought-Iron)
Side1: Chad Frawley (Chadisdabomb04)
Side2: Patrick Walsh (Zaten the changeling)
Side3: Beckham “Beck” Woods (FanficReader920)
Simulation Side-character1/minor character1: Andy Smith (Naga is alive)
Yes, I'm still working on it. I'd like to pitch a plot.
The eight characters are some of the first to be connected to the simulations following its initial release, and once connected, encounter each other once again and begin to build up the world around them.
Celebrating a year of Pony-MeTM and beyond! 
Have four lines of long description. 
Lisa Garnet has an imaginary friend. She's a pony, because she likes ponies. Her name is Celestia.
Lisa Garnet lost her parents one day, and she was sad.
Lisa Garnet had an imaginary friend, but now she's real.
Lisa Garnet is Twilight Sparkle, in her own little reality.
T-minus two hours...
The backup story to be published for Pony-Me's one-year anniversary tomorrow has finally been finished. The story is a small prequel of sorts, explaining in story form how everything began, and how it was all set into motion.
There's another, deeper meaning behind it, but I'll leave it up to the readers to discover.
Just as the original story, the cover art is created in collaboration between myself and my sister, Momoruuu.
We missed the OC target, and I am no longer taking OCs.
I will finish writing the backup anniversary story and publish that on the 10th.
For the eight of you who have submitted an OC, I will try to work them into their own, separate one-shot based in the Pony-Me universe, but I cannot guarantee the timing of when the story takes place or is published.
If you have any questions, feel free to ask below.
So, December 10th marks a year since Pony-Me first went live. Just to celebrate a bit on just how far the story's gotten (and grown) since then, I'd say that it's about time we open up guest chapters again!
Alternatively, I could (try to) write a short one-shot based on the Pony-Me universe with your OCs!
Heck, how about both? Catch y'all below the break with the details.
Yeah, added a buttload to my personal copy of it to draw off of for future chapters. I've also changed the file from .docx to .doc on account of Microsoft Word 2002 (Office XP) being unable to save multiple versions of .docx files to track changes, while being able to do so with the older .doc format.
Anyways, since the document now provides major spoilers for potential future events, it will only be accessible if you PM me directly.
I need a newer version of Office.
Now that I've archived the disks, I've decided to try out the program in DOSBox with the currently-in-progress chapter of Pony-Me. Outside of being slightly buggy when dealing with a file format that's almost thirty years newer than the program itself, it actually works surprisingly well!
And if so, what would it be called?
The advantage of a group would be that there can be a single, comprehensive collection of all stories within the Pony-Me universe, and an easily-accessible resource for additional lore and information that otherwise may not be included in the story itself.
Basically, bonus material.
Give your thoughts in the comments below.
Given the loose that requirements gave the three that I already have, it's a bit hard to actually get somebody to look at the chapter at all before publishing.
Requirements are simply to be available within a reasonable amount of time (within half a week, give or take a few days), and be honest about your opinions. There are no deadlines, no strict times, just as long as I don't have to wait an entire month for a single reply, or else that'd hold up the entire story.
Began writing Pony-Me Part 3, revealing more info about Zoey's dad, who as mentioned in the currently-published chapter now runs the company. This chapter also sets up a new, continuous conflict that'll last until the end of the story, and will serve as an underlying base point to reveal even more lore surrounding past events.
Still waiting for prereader approval on the completed epilogue chapter.
I spent tonight mostly just combing through and updating story plans and such for Pony-Me to factor in current events, new characters, and to set up a working backstory, lore, and conflict for Part 3.
The next chapter will be a short epilogue to Part 2 that gives additional insight to Equestria, but doesn't end the story. Think of it as an epilogue to the ongoing conflict throughout Part 2, rather than one for the entire story.
With the story nearing its final stretch and resolving multiple conflicts, all while setting up new ones for Part 3, I'd very much appreciate it if I had a couple more prereaders, or just people to bounce ideas off of.
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