Anyone wanna help out in the making of Pony-Me? · 11:36pm Oct 15th, 2018
With the story nearing its final stretch and resolving multiple conflicts, all while setting up new ones for Part 3, I'd very much appreciate it if I had a couple more prereaders, or just people to bounce ideas off of.
Currently, the upcoming chapter stands at 2,406 words, and I don't exactly feel like self-editing really does as much justice to the story as it used to. My main problem is simply just getting the story to flow correctly with all of the new plot elements being revealed in each chapter, and based on how the story's rating tanks just a little bit more with every update, I think it might be losing its touch with some of the readers.
If needed, I can provide details on any major character or location that the story takes place in to clear up confusion.
PM me if you're interested. I don't think I need any help on grammar, but plot flow and ideas would be greatly appreciated.
Not to mention the fact that Part 3 so far is likely to be the shortest of the three parts simply because the central conflict of the story is about to be resolved.
