Holy crap this chapter took more work than chapter 8, despite being like half the size. I used to have this nasty issue of glossing over something that I didn't feel like explaining at the moment or planning on explaining later then forgetting. I didn't take good chapter notes as I went along.
*spoilers if you haven't read chapter 9*

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Honestly, there wasn't a whole lot wrong with this chapter. Mostly some bland descriptions and not setting the mood properly.

Okay this time I admit I abused the "I did this..." rule a tone. There were other random sections where I knew I had a purpose for them at the time, but after rereading it, I had no idea what they were reffering to. I spruced up some of the descriptions, as a lot of it felt kind of...basic. I added in more emotion and tried to really drive home hoe the current predicament was psychologically messing with the Taraskans.
Hope you all enjoy and as always, thanks for being a fan!

Aaaaand there we go! This chapter was a little more tricky. I had some confusing numbers in the squads and made some writing errors. Also there was some context confusion about who was doing what. not sure if anyone noticed or cared, but I did. Tried to make it a lot more gut-wrenching and heart-breaking.
SPOILERS if you haven't read past this chapter.

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Okay so my ending plot points are just...super messed up and I have to fix them. There's a lot of " Situation A needs to happen so person B can save person A, but person B can't get there until situation B and AAAAAAAHHHHH!
I thought I had resolved this, but when I started writing the chapter, I realized there's a few vital details I missed and changing ONE changes like three others so I'm taking time to figure it out.

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Okay...it's almost here. I'm not gonna give numbers, but I'm so close to marking KOTD book 1 as completed. Like I'm on the home stretch where a lot of chapters are prewritten scenes from back when I first started writing KOTD. This point until the end is planned out storywise, with plenty of room for me to add new stuff. I'm so excited but a tad sad to see book 1 be done and over with. With the next chapter, I'm gonna crack down and edit a few more chapters.

So that much is new. Sorry for no update on MLR&D:MiM, ive been having pains in my side and had to go to the doctors about it, sadly the doctor i went to is a fucking Quack and im in even more pain now due to them not treating the issue. So there's that.

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IN WHICH ONE YEAR HAS PASSED
Hi there. Weren't expecting to see me again, were you? Well, I wanted to let you know a couple of things. First, my next Burritoverse entry is ready to go but for formatting issues, and my latest comedy is almost complete -- I made some headway on it last night. Second, well, follow me past the jump for real talk.

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The chapter is coming along nicely. I've got a few things going on for the next few days, so it might not be up till next week sometime, but I do plan to go ahead and try to push it out this week.

If you hadn't noticed, I'm terrible at keeping to a schedule, but I'm doing what I can to bring this chapter out as soon as possible, while maintaining my standard quality.

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Okay so I found like...two errors in this one. There wasn't anything wrong with it, and it's been that way for the last two chapters, so I think the worst is over. My main focus though, was to lengthen the chapter. It was sitting at a cringy 1600 words give or take. So I added about another 600. There's more plotting and predicting, as well as our heroes learning more about the world they're in. I think it looks a lot better, and I'm rather happy I decided to edit it tonight. My work keyboard

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Posted here since the author is silencing critique of their story

And threatening to sue me for defamation and slander

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Yeah... sorry about that

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Have I been working on King of the Dead? Yes. Has it all been on the next chapter? No. The next chapter is like 90% of the way finished, but I keep getting these huge urges to work on some of the final chapters, which in my opinion, are going to be super badass. Thank you for being patient!

Progress on the next chapter is going well, but I'm having a hard time finding just the right music to help me write. I need something that pairs well with telling a sad story.

The combat in chapter 35 was...well there were a few minor changes to make. This one was less on combat and more on consequences though.

Didn't change much in chapter 36. A few typos, changed some wording is all.

This chapter is kicking my ass. I'm so close to being done with it. It tells another part of a very familiar story in the MLP universe but from a different perspective. I didn't realize until I got to it, that there are a lot of questions I have. I'm filling them in, coming up with how I imagined things played out and why. I REALLY don't want to rewatch the episodes since I've seen them enough. All in all though, this chapter should be fun! Thanks again for being fans! Chapter should be ready

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Trying to spruce up the long description. The short description was a friggin' nightmare, but I'm rather set on it given its extreme limitations. The long description though, I got like three pages dedicated to different variations of it. Currently, it feels like I'm spoonfeeding the reader and I hate it. I tried switching to a letter like

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Hey all, just wanted to give you an update on the current madness that is my mind, and how I'm going about writing my stories. Below is going to be my current schedule, and might change depending on which stories are completed:

Monday: Red Dead Revival

Tuesday: Twilight's School for Gifted Unicorns

Wednesday: Death is Coming

Thursday: Unannounced Project that I am currently working on :p

Friday: Rest/Posting day (depending on chapters finished)

Saturday: Rest Day

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