The frozen wastes of Stalliongrad teem with conflict and strife as pony, machine, and the wild battle ferociously for control. One unicorn, on a mission she did not ask for, makes her way into Tartarus itself.
9001578 Hmmm. That's a good question. Silver comes from somewhat of a proper place, her voice is effeminate and lady like, so she would sound, IMO, similar to how Rarity sounds, though perhaps a tad lighter in tone. The kind of tine that would be sweet and enticing to another pony, but also says that she's not a "dumb blonde" so to speak. Her tone changes when she's angry or sufficiently perturbed, rising in volume a little bit and gaining a sharpness. I would say primarily she'd sound like Rarity, with bits of Cheerilee mixed in (when not angry/perturbed).
Ghost is near a decade younger than Silver, as he is in late teens/early twenties. He is at least in part emotionally detached in how he speaks. He is gruff and to the point and has no compunction about stating whether an idea (or somepony) is stupid or not, as he has done with Silver multiple times. He's passed the point of being "squeaky" but doesn't have deep smoker voice (even though he does smoke). If I were to put a pony from the show to him, I'd say a slightly deeper Shining Armor.
9002330 Lol, that's one way to put it From the ooutside in, yeah, definitely a cult, but ever tried telling a cultist that they are a cultist? Not so easy, as others will find out as they deal with Silver. Plus, I love the prospect of taking things that people think they "know" only to find out they aren't what they think they are.
9009102 Thanks! And I totally agree! Some of my favorite games are jump scare games, many of my favorite areas in exploration games are underground (caves, bases, excavation sites, etc). And when I started thinking up stuff for this story, I HAD to have it!
And yeah, I noticed the past and present tense mistakes. Didn't have a pre-reader for the earlier chapters (plus I was so eager to get started that I said "screw that!" and posted. An error on my part, one I hope to get better at).
As for the "recurses" () for making a stable like #46 and the experiments? I have my reasons. We'll see in later chapters!
If the main OCs in this story were voiced, what would they sound like?
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Hmmm. That's a good question. Silver comes from somewhat of a proper place, her voice is effeminate and lady like, so she would sound, IMO, similar to how Rarity sounds, though perhaps a tad lighter in tone. The kind of tine that would be sweet and enticing to another pony, but also says that she's not a "dumb blonde" so to speak. Her tone changes when she's angry or sufficiently perturbed, rising in volume a little bit and gaining a sharpness. I would say primarily she'd sound like Rarity, with bits of Cheerilee mixed in (when not angry/perturbed).
Ghost is near a decade younger than Silver, as he is in late teens/early twenties. He is at least in part emotionally detached in how he speaks. He is gruff and to the point and has no compunction about stating whether an idea (or somepony) is stupid or not, as he has done with Silver multiple times. He's passed the point of being "squeaky" but doesn't have deep smoker voice (even though he does smoke). If I were to put a pony from the show to him, I'd say a slightly deeper Shining Armor.
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Lol, that's one way to put it From the ooutside in, yeah, definitely a cult, but ever tried telling a cultist that they are a cultist? Not so easy, as others will find out as they deal with Silver. Plus, I love the prospect of taking things that people think they "know" only to find out they aren't what they think they are.
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Thanks! And I totally agree! Some of my favorite games are jump scare games, many of my favorite areas in exploration games are underground (caves, bases, excavation sites, etc). And when I started thinking up stuff for this story, I HAD to have it!
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The Holy Carp, eh? Magikarp, is that you?
And yeah, I noticed the past and present tense mistakes. Didn't have a pre-reader for the earlier chapters (plus I was so eager to get started that I said "screw that!" and posted. An error on my part, one I hope to get better at).
As for the "recurses" () for making a stable like #46 and the experiments? I have my reasons. We'll see in later chapters!
Damn... Shit really hit the fan in this chapter. First did we have the flowers and bees, and now do we have those things... Damn just damn!
Nitpicks:
"Looks like Scarlett is awake" was
"We will need to find another way out." You are missing an " in the end of this sentence.