The frozen wastes of Stalliongrad teem with conflict and strife as pony, machine, and the wild battle ferociously for control. One unicorn, on a mission she did not ask for, makes her way into Tartarus itself.
Knowing that it is arcano tech would I say that Silver are correct, and all of the robots are actually tech golems with spirits/demons trapped inside of them, that is why so many create chaos, they do not want to serve their pony masters!
Nitpicks: " It squealed in pain and it erratically scampered about," I would say switch these two words around " Each my steps felt heavy," missing an of "and that is when the door slid closed with a finality that made my heart stop" was "dressed the elegant black robes of her office" missing an in " came the demonic robot voice." Unless she knows what a robot is would metalic work better here
Knowing that it is arcano tech would I say that Silver are correct, and all of the robots are actually tech golems with spirits/demons trapped inside of them, that is why so many create chaos, they do not want to serve their pony masters!
Nitpicks:
" It squealed in pain and it erratically scampered about," I would say switch these two words around
" Each my steps felt heavy," missing an of
"and that is when the door slid closed with a finality that made my heart stop" was
"dressed the elegant black robes of her office" missing an in
" came the demonic robot voice." Unless she knows what a robot is would metalic work better here