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Evdog


I'm usually a musician but on occasions, I write stories. Don't expect them to be timeless classics, though. I doubt that anything I put on here will be >2500 words

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    - October, 2014
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They lied to me. They told me I’d been sick, that I'd contracted a virus, and that’s why I couldn't remember two years of my life. Celestia, my friends, Shining Armor, Cadance, Spike… they all looked me straight in the eye, and told me the same thing, the same lie, for eighteen years.

I will never forgive them.


Equestria at peace and Luna by her side, Celestia has everything she ever wanted. But now that she has what she asked for, Celestia refuses to uphold her end of the deal and Zecora does not abide broken contracts.


You think I’m crazy; don’t you? You’re just like all the others, judging me before you know me because you believe everything you hear without even considering that that the world might be wrong; because you don’t think!

I don’t care.

The world doesn’t know me, Celestia’ doesn’t understand me, and you don’t deserve to glimpse the world I live in.


Set twenty-two years after Storm of Secrets.
Reading trhe Summary of Storm of Secrets is recommended but this hyper summary will brief you on everything you need to know -

World:

1. Most alicorns are mortal unicorn/pegasi with an average amount of magic. There are six cosmic forces that require an Alicorn to steward them, and when one steward dies another takes over, becomes immortal, and gains a large but non-ridiculous power boost.

2. MQ is a measure for a unicorn's raw magical power. An average unicorn had 100 MQ. Unicorns with more than 400MQ are referred to as Alpha Unicorns. Twilight 636, Celestia 1220.

Plotline:

1. The Everfree Forest is bigger on the inside than the outside. The deeper levels include multiple hives of changelings and monsters called Terrormongers who can create illusions, feed off fear, and are being held at bay by a secret Equestrian army corp called Everfree Rangers. (Details unimportant.)

2. Rainbow Dash is married to a Ranger veteran named Silent Storm.

3. Zecora is a martial art master; and has trained elite rangers for years, including Shining Armor and Silent Storm.

4. Shining Armor has gotten a massive boost to his power, and now has an MQ over 1800.

5. Cadance is Luna and Celestia's niece! Her mother is Celestia's half-sister who stewards the oceans and rules the island Queendom of Oatlantis.


There will be satellite stories linked in the authors notes of various chapters; read them if you want a fuller picture of what's going on. Some of them have less obvious connections, then others, but they are all relevant; particularly Forsaken and Celestia's Smartypants.

I almost rated this story mature. This is not a clopfic or a gorefic, but there are a lot of serious issues including things like rape, torture, suicide, addictions etc. Consider the story to have a lot of mature content, not juvenile content. I don't claim to have all the answers about everything I touch on; but I hope I've at least asked the right questions, in a way that will make people think.

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Cadance or Canterlot? Faced with an impossible decision, Shining Armor is compelled down a dangerous road. When things quickly spiral out of his control, he must face the possibility of loosing everything he loves.

After years of waiting, Rainbow Dash has finally joined the Wonderbolts but is now wishing that she never had. When a mysterious unicorn appears out of nowhere to save Derpy and disappears just as suddenly, Dash resolves to find him; following him into a world of dark secrets she could have never possibly imagined.

Twilight can tell her brother is hiding something, he promised not to, but he is. How is she meant to obey Celestia's command to help him, when he won't even tell her what's wrong? Every night he wakes up screaming, and every day he's more afraid. How can she make him trust her before, it's too late?

This is Cadance; can anypony hear me? We're trapped in the Everfree Forest. All I see are trees in every direction, but there's something out there; and it's coming closer. Shining Armor is sick, I think he's dying. Please, if anypony finds this message, send help.

Granny Smith, Big Macintosh, Apple Bloom
Have found somepony who might know what happened to mom and dad. Going to investigate. If I don't come back, know that I love you. Don't follow me.
Apple Jack

Look at them; the blissfully ignorant citizens of Ponyville. They think their freedom comes without cost. They believe the peace they enjoy has no price. They have no idea of the war that is waged, and the sacrifices made, to win these things which they take for granted. But that is how it must be. If they ever learned the truth, everything would be undone. Listen well to my story, and then never speak of it for as long as you live. If you tell even one pony, Equestria will burn.


Set one year, after season two, in an alternate universe where Shining Armor and Cadance never married.

WARNING: Contains some gore

Picture by Mouby

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