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Firesight


I'm an IT Brony who writes stories based on a show for 8-year old girls whose content is meant for anything but 8-year old girls.

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  • Thursday
    Midnight Rising update; Feathered Hearts C&C teaser...

    Hey, folks. Here’s my weekly writing update. I’m tagging this as C&C since that’s what the teaser below is about, but the blog is about both it and Unleash the Magic - Midnight Rising.

    Unleash the Magic - Midnight Rising

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  • 2 weeks
    Prereader verdict on new Midnight Rising chapter is in...

    And unfortunately, that verdict is unanimous:

    Complaints were: too meta, hard to follow, does nothing to advance the plot, and potentially makes things worse while trying to fix them.

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  • 2 weeks
    Still waiting on Midnight Rising prereads...

    Which are particularly important this time, because the first preread I got back was negative. As it came from AJ_Aficionado, whose opinions I particularly value mostly because he’s more interested in the story than the sex, I tend to give what he said about it credence but still want to hear from everyone else before I start making changes to the new chapter.

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  • 3 weeks
    Mind changed on removing the griffon arc from Midnight Rising + teaser

    After receiving pleas from multiple readers to keep the Enter the Griffon chapters in place, I have decided to do so and go with my original plan, which was to simply offer new readers the chance

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  • 3 weeks
    One final thing...

    I have been advised by no less an authority than CHS acting Vice-Principal Ms. Cheerilee to use the upcoming Midnight Rising chapter as strictly a recap to relaunch the story, and not get into Lemon Zest until the following chapter, when I can devote a full entry to it without any split in focus. No, really. She did. You’ll see what I mean when the chapter launches, but basically, I’m

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Jun
26th
2020

Nightmare Night Update and a Question for Readers · 5:34pm Jun 26th, 2020

I have around 5500 words on the new chapter and three of four sections completed, though the 4th--the all-important Peregrine section--I have yet to start. I expect to finish it this weekend; depending on how quickly it comes (no pun intended) there's at least an outside chance the chapter will launch on Sunday.

This will be milestone chapter #30 in a story I never dreamt would go so long. Clopfics are usually hard to keep going and interesting past a certain point, but this one seems to have managed to keep the interest of both me and my readers. Peregrine, for whatever reason, seems to have become a muse of sorts, as I've greatly enjoyed writing for him, and I want to make sure his climactic section here is worthy of him.

A final twist was promised, and will be delivered in it. This will be a usual four-section chapter, with two Twilight-turned-Midnight/Sunset/Delta sections, a third section that checks in on the pursuit of the Pie-sister pursued and sorely endangered Nightmare, and of course, the final taking of Peregrine Pacil and the final form he gains.

After this, I need to double back and hit the battle between Shadowdash and Night Owl, as well as the aftermath, to say nothing of the Discord/Flutterbat/Nightmarity scene. I may or may not get to a duel between Eclipse and Annie Smith at this rate, as it's getting time to head into the story finish.

And finally, a question: do folks want me to go back and tell the tale of how Pinkie converted her sisters and her parents? I've shied away from that to this point because I wasn't certain how well it would go over. So sound off in the comments if you have an opinion on the matter.

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The conversion of the Pie sisters doesn't interest me much. I wouldn't be opposed to reading it but I'm fine if it's not included. From this blog I also get the impression that Flutterbat and Discord won't play a role in the next chapter which is unexpected.

I have no strong feelings about seeing Pinkie Pie convert her family.

The story thread I'm most interested in is the ultimate fate of Starlight Glimmer who has been stuck in limbo for quite some time as the infection spreads out in all directions. Over the years, Glim-Glam's stock has only ever gone up in value and with the show's official run at an end, she's basically granite at this stage, no offense to Limestone intended. :raritywink: I just adore her now and more than anypony else, I want to see her arc build to a satisfying conclusion.

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You're right, I neglected to mention FB and Discord. :ajsleepy: That was forgetful of me, but I edited the blog to include it. That will either be the next chapter or the one after, depending on what I want to do next.

Not opposed is my stance. Normally I don't go for incest, but you're generally good at making hard sells. If you do it I'm confident you'll find a way to make it interesting, at least to yourself, which is what's important.

Well, it was my request so I'm obviously biased.:ajsleepy: I'm interested mostly because Pinkie is the only one that didn't corrupt somepony on-screen, and it would be interesting see howshe handles her sisters (mostly Maud- she's awesome:heart:) and her moher for some reason, but seriously, do how you feel about. Yes or no, the last thing is a project that you didn't put your heart in. Do as you please.:twilightsmile:

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Not opposed is my stance. Normally I don't go for incest, but you're generally good at making hard sells. If you do it I'm confident you'll find a way to make it interesting, at least to yourself, which is what's important.

Appreciate the vote of confidence. One thing I've learned along the way is that if you're not into a scene, you can't do it justice in writing it. It has to be something that I enjoy, or it's just not going to work.

In this case, I'm pretty sure I could find the interest, but as I'll mention in response to the second comment below, there's other issues involved.

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Well, it was my request so I'm obviously biased.:ajsleepy: I'm interested mostly because Pinkie is the only one that didn't corrupt somepony on-screen, and it would be interesting see howshe handles her sisters (mostly Maud- she's awesome:heart:) and her moher for some reason,

It's a valid point. The reason I haven't for now is a little annoying--the simple fact is that Pinkamena is very hard to write for and do her justice; I even punted a scene with her in The Lawyer and The Unicorn and let whatever happened happen off-screen. I did push the envelope with her in the latest Nightmare Night chapter I just posted, so see if you like what I did.

but seriously, do how you feel about. Yes or no, the last thing is a project that you didn't put your heart in. Do as you please.:twilightsmile:

Will do, and thank you.

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