Jun
16th
2020
Quick Question For My Most Loyal Readers · 11:29pm Jun 16th, 2020
So I'm getting frustrated as all hell writing the next chapter. I've scrapped it roughly three thousand words in because it was frankly shite.
So while I figuring out the path to take, I have a question to ask you lot. It's a bit out of the blue, but I'm honestly curious.
Out of all of my stories, which one do you like the most and why?
I look forward to your answers, now back to struggling on this bloody thing 
Help my lonely soul is still one of my top fifteen favorite stories. I still hope there is a part two to it one-day.
A good theme to enjoy your storys
https://www.fimfiction.net/story/134427/never-judge-a-bug-by-her-cover
Its very different from most of the storys and Chrysalis is the best Bugwaifu
Not to forget the sequel under construction
https://www.fimfiction.net/story/270723/mated-for-life
Hope for a happy ending in a rotten to the core Equis
Above all the others, I loved Absolute Power the most followed immediately by The Royal Breakup Chronicles. As opposed to a fair few of your more recent stories, these two did a really good job of making the princesses in question feel sympathetic, despite their extreme yandere tendencies. Taking Mated for Life, for instance, despite Celestia's understandable reasons for going after Richard, it's still very clear she's a villain and not just an antagonist.
To be honest, I'm split between Cinnamon and To Mate For Life. Cinnamon because I love stories of that genre, and TMFL because damn that's some good stuff! The drama and story behind it drives me to keep on wanting more TMFL and rereading it, and keeps both stories on Favourites!
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Note that she isn't yandere in the story either, something not often done in my work.
In the beginning she was going to be normal good Celestia, but as the story continued it made more sense for her to become a competent force to be concerned about. And while she's made some questionable decisions, there is little doubt that she is someone to tread carefully around when you're her enemy.
I'm looking forward to showing just what she is capable of...
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Basicly anything. As long the goal is archived...
Absolute power, it felt like something straight out of a horror novel at times. If Tobias had a good ending it would have been perfect in my books, although the one where Tia drugs him was terrifying too. I'd honestly love to see a sequel with either type of ending mentioned, there's a lot of directions that could go.
Royal Break up chronicles was another fave. The Luna one was good, even with the grammar issues, and I'd love to see more sad and angry alicorns chasing people for cuddles.
Mates for life is a good story, but I kinda miss the whole deception plot of the first half where they hid their relationship in plain sight under the nose of the princess. The weird dome is making things fun again though.
Lastly, I loved the concept of the thief story you had, where tia confronts the thief after Luna catches him. I wish you'd continue that.
i will be honest here i have followed Mated For Life for a long time,, but life has prevented me from reading this grate story for way to long.
it is in my top ten list for when life allows me to ..
Mated for life i want to expand so much but i will totaly f**k it up i am dyslectic and my writting is not structured
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Try buddy, it's all good whatever comes out
Bro don't kill me but I honestly love the Nothing is set in stone series because one, it got me into mlp fan fics and your writing, two its just a really interesting and over all different story, and three it really got me in my feels bro lets be honest here.
The ones of yours I’ve read every chapter of are mated for life, it’s prequel, and Help My Lonely Soul. Each one I enjoyed because you displayed a villainess in a more realistic way. They still had their personalities, but you went in, explored, and made why they were the way they are make sense. I never question how you write characters because in the context of the story it is quite easy to feel as though ‘that’s just who they are’. Though if I’m completely honest, I want to see you write another Nightmare Moon story with a happy ending. I’m a sucker for a good NMM fic.
Absolute power tops my list.
Cinnamon comes close second
Let's face it: some (or most) of your readers here are single virgins since birth (and basically most of the old folks who likes MLP)
So the feeling of someone going after you with murderous obsession is enticing to those type of people (myself included)
My top three, including series, are Absolute Power, Royal Break Up Chronicles, and the Nothing is Set in Stone Series.
Haven’t read all of em, so excluding mated for life, cinnamon was my favorite.
Hmm... thats tough! Id say either mated for life or mirror image! Mated for life because i like the struggle and the attempts she makes at Richard. And i also like mirror image because of luna being obsessed
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Ok so the idea is great few pick up such story but its your damn good writing i am sure that you describe pile of garbage and make us hyped about and ending us loving the story now with your ability in writing and and this spicy idea its only natural to this great i mean you have lore good backstory mindblown events that make sense not sci fi turds those last minute y turns we can never expect something and will happen it not that simple with you ;) you always planning a comeback like saying ''Ha gotcha'' returning our expectations in our face and we loving it.
now the idea taht chrysalis stared as a villain wanting richard only to be benefited only ending up loving him the world rejecting that and trying to separated and chryssie having that spartan rage mode on everytime something like taht happens also richard actually responding with the same passion is just perfect.
I personally love "Nothing is Set in Stone" because it was the first-ever story of yours I read. Also, I like the sappy romance of it and I would like a happy ending for Richard, Chrysalis, and possibly Emily like you originally had for Cadence and Alex.
I've read all but 9 of your stories and have 1 on the read it later list, and honestly I've enjoyed all of em. The main reasons I keep coming back is the way you portay your characters, they feel more "real" in how they act or react to situations presented to them. That and you don't run with the same old traits and personas found in other stories, I guess simplified version is I like different and not run-of-the-mill stories and yours definitely scratch that itch!
Absolute Power is my favourite, then Royal Breakup Chronicles and Cinnamon.
One, Mated For Life, Absolute Power, Royal Break Up Chronicles, Cinnamon, Alicorn Instinct, Nothing Is Set In Stone, Help My Lonely Soul, My Hearts Betrayal, Come Back To Me. When it comes down to Alicorn romance stories, your stories are the best, you were the only writer that I read almost every story you had written. I like that some of your stories had a touch of destiny to them, bringing two souls together so they would experience an eternal love. Immortality, power and eternal love for both pony and human is what makes your stories great. Aside from that, I like your writing style, how fluid your writing is. I don't remember when anything poked my eye and I had to stop and read a line multiple times to understand what was going on. Overall your stories are great and you are a good writer. It is good to have you back :)