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Firesight


I'm an IT Brony who writes stories based on a show for 8-year old girls whose content is meant for anything but 8-year old girls.

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  • Today
    Did two things this past weekend...

    First, I ran 10k for the first time in two months after laying off that long to let my ankle bursitis subside, trying to allow the area to generally heal up. It appears it worked. To my delight, there was no ankle pain after and I hadn’t even lost much stamina thanks to hitting an elliptical machine twice a week for an hour instead of jogging. My upper legs are another matter, though. They’re

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  • Wednesday
    C&C chapter 40 entering prereads tonight + teaser

    Much as I didn’t want to, I made the decision to break it up since the full length of the War Council meeting had exceeded 20,000 words and will probably approach 25k for the now-two chapters before all is said and done. The breakpoint itself will be between learning about the general war situation both Aricia and the Griffon Kingdom face, and then discussing what in all the Crows they’re going

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  • 1 week
    Midnight Rising/C&C update: April showers may bring May flowers...

    But of more interest is the emergence of 17-year cicadas in my area. Big, ugly, red-eyed insects that are the size of your thumb but basically harmless, as long as you can get past all the shed skins they leave behind on leaves and the everpresent and disconcertly loud background sound they produce as a mating call. Fortunately, the outbreak in my area seems pretty limited. There's a few around,

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  • 2 weeks
    Midnight Rising update; Feathered Hearts C&C teaser...

    Hey, folks. Here’s my weekly writing update. I’m tagging this as C&C since that’s what the teaser below is about, but the blog is about both it and Unleash the Magic - Midnight Rising.

    Unleash the Magic - Midnight Rising

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  • 4 weeks
    Prereader verdict on new Midnight Rising chapter is in...

    And unfortunately, that verdict is unanimous:

    Complaints were: too meta, hard to follow, does nothing to advance the plot, and potentially makes things worse while trying to fix them.

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Jun
9th
2020

Looking to publish next Nightmare Night chapter this weekend · 2:29pm Jun 9th, 2020

It's about half-done at 4000 words right now. To perhaps little surprise, I've had trouble getting back into the mood to write clop with all the crap happening in the world around us, but to that I tell myself that escapes are just made all the more important. So the work goes on.

The new chapter will follow a familiar pattern of a main scene and a side scene that sets the stage for a future main scene. The main scene, of course, is the long-awaited and much-anticipated taking of our favorite G-E courier Peregrine Pacil. The side scene is a surprise, as I decided it's time to deal with another slightly languishing but as-yet untaken character, whose handling will be... tricky. My only hint--it's not Starlight. That might actually be enough for some of you to guess.

BTW, AJ_Aficionado has come up with the term "Alternating Current" to describe this style of storytelling where you shift back and forth between scenes and perspectives. This as opposed to doing a "Direct Current" story flow whether everything is linear and there's no real scene shifting except maybe by chapter. As I think that's an excellent insight and description, I hereby accept those terms into my writing lexicon.

Comments ( 2 )

I'm looking forward to reading the next chapter. The only character that I can think of that fits your description is Discord. I will find out when I read the chapter and perhaps it will also give an idea for how long it will last until Starlight gets taken.

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You'll find out if your guess is right in a few days, probably. And despite what I said earlier, I'm actually leaning against converting Starlight at this point, only because there's a very particular scene I'm aiming for at the end of this which only makes sense if Starlight isn't taken. So both she and Trixie will probably escape this unscathed... physically if not mentally.

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