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Firesight


I'm an IT Brony who writes stories based on a show for 8-year old girls whose content is meant for anything but 8-year old girls.

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  • Thursday
    Midnight Rising update; Feathered Hearts C&C teaser...

    Hey, folks. Here’s my weekly writing update. I’m tagging this as C&C since that’s what the teaser below is about, but the blog is about both it and Unleash the Magic - Midnight Rising.

    Unleash the Magic - Midnight Rising

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  • 1 week
    Prereader verdict on new Midnight Rising chapter is in...

    And unfortunately, that verdict is unanimous:

    Complaints were: too meta, hard to follow, does nothing to advance the plot, and potentially makes things worse while trying to fix them.

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  • 2 weeks
    Still waiting on Midnight Rising prereads...

    Which are particularly important this time, because the first preread I got back was negative. As it came from AJ_Aficionado, whose opinions I particularly value mostly because he’s more interested in the story than the sex, I tend to give what he said about it credence but still want to hear from everyone else before I start making changes to the new chapter.

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  • 3 weeks
    Mind changed on removing the griffon arc from Midnight Rising + teaser

    After receiving pleas from multiple readers to keep the Enter the Griffon chapters in place, I have decided to do so and go with my original plan, which was to simply offer new readers the chance

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  • 3 weeks
    One final thing...

    I have been advised by no less an authority than CHS acting Vice-Principal Ms. Cheerilee to use the upcoming Midnight Rising chapter as strictly a recap to relaunch the story, and not get into Lemon Zest until the following chapter, when I can devote a full entry to it without any split in focus. No, really. She did. You’ll see what I mean when the chapter launches, but basically, I’m

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Mar
3rd
2020

250 likes for Nightmare Night! · 8:09pm Mar 3rd, 2020

It's been a long and patient climb. But for reaching that milestone, a slight change in plans and yet another question to readers:

As a thank-you to readers, both old and new, I will release a new chapter on the main story this month along with Firefly. It'll be third on my to-do list after finishing off the first Temptations and Transformations story arc, which I just released the 6th chapter of today (with 2 to go?), and redoing the opening section of the last chapter as I said yesterday. The new chapter will contain one main sex scene, and I'll give readers the choice of which to write:

  1. Shadowdash x Night Owl
  2. The taking and transformation of Peregrine Pacil.
  3. Other (say in the comments)

If you have a preference, sound off in the comments or upvote the stated preferences of others. And be sure to check out Temptations and Transformations to learn more about Night Owl's origin!

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Comments ( 11 )

We'll get you to 300 yet! :yay:

Well earned. To be candid, I'm suprised that it took so long. For some reason it takes time for well-written stories to gain likes.

I vote for third option- Derpy and Vinyl and Mayor Mare are bound to happen so I propose Pie sisters and their parents. Want to Pinkamena in action. Especially on Maud. Can't believed she's been caught.

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Well earned. To be candid, I'm suprised that it took so long. For some reason it takes time for well-written stories to gain likes.

Particularly mine, it would seem. :ajsleepy: The only story I ever wrote that took off immediately was Unleash the Magic: Midnight Rising, notching 100 likes in the first four days. For the rest, I had to earn my likes gradually, grinding them out chapter by chapter. I'm sure it's going to be that way for the side story as well.

I vote for third option- Derpy and Vinyl and Mayor Mare are bound to happen so I propose Pie sisters and their parents. Want to Pinkamena in action. Especially on Maud. Can't believed she's been caught.

Those three will happen in the side story if you're not already following it. :twilightsmile:

But I tell you what--since you've been good about commenting and the only reader aside from AJA (who prereads) to respond to this so far? You got it! I'll do it. If you like, you can even preread since I'm one short one of my regular prereaders right now. Interested?

I vote for the transformation of Peregrine. I'm also glad to see the story reached 250 upvotes it certainly deserves more.

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Those three will happen in the side story if you're not already following it. :twilightsmile:

I am following. And must say, Owlia and Certified Mail's romance is actually kind of sweet. And the sex dialogue is a little cheesy. But I like Fondue very much.

But I tell you what--since you've been good about commenting and the only reader aside from AJA (who prereads) to respond to this so far? You got it! I'll do it. If you like, you can even preread since I'm one short one of my regular prereaders right now. Interested?

Yes, thank you! :pinkiehappy: But I'm gonna need some instructions because it's my first time.:twilightblush:

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Welcome to the team! You're going to love our benefits package. It's an actual package! ... of sorts. :raritywink:

Belated congratulations! My vote's for number 2.

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Those three will happen in the side story if you're not already following it. :twilightsmile:

I am following. And must say, Owlia and Certified Mail's romance is actually kind of sweet. And the sex dialogue is a little cheesy. But I like Fondue very much.

You know, Fondue would be a good name for a pony character! I'll have to use that at some point. I'm glad you're following, though. Since I didn't see you comment, I wasn't sure. Comments, sadly, have been very hard to come by on the side story thus far.

But I tell you what--since you've been good about commenting and the only reader aside from AJA (who prereads) to respond to this so far? You got it! I'll do it. If you like, you can even preread since I'm one short one of my regular prereaders right now. Interested?

Yes, thank you! :pinkiehappy: But I'm gonna need some instructions because it's my first time.:twilightblush:

Not much to it. :twilightsmile: I'll PM you a google doc link and then you go to it and comment/edit as you like. I'll even let you do it on the next side story chapter if you're interested as a warm-up of sorts.

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Thank you! Looks like I'll need to do both the Peregrine scene and the requested Pinkie + sisters one, then. But this weekend will be spent finishing off the last side story chapter before that goes on hiatus for a bit, and then redoing the first section of the last main story chapter you flagged as having issues.

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Sorry I've been busy, lately. I'm good now. And sure send it. I'm sorry if won't be able to contribute much, though. English is not my first language.

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