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A French brony who loves to read and write. My English is not perfect, but I will do my best!

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  • 7 weeks
    TV Tropes Page Apple Bloom's Mansion

    Someone made a TV Tropes page about the Apple Bloom's Mansion saga.

    Link.

    I made quite the number of tropes without knowing, lol.

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  • 10 weeks
    Subspace Army Tree Before Chapter 168

    Here is the tree showing the officers' ranks in the Subspace Army before chapter 168. I advise to read the chapter first before seeing the image.

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  • 11 weeks
    "New" Story and New Group

    I'm starting to write a new story, or not really. It will actually be a compilation of stories in the universe of UME. Tales From The Omniverse. More than a compilation, this is a group made by Cyrus Colter there. In this group, people will be able to post their Tales happening in UME's universes.

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  • 13 weeks
    Sizes Precision

    With A Sweetie Dream Land's rewriting, I have changed some sizes.

    As of the starts of A Sweetie Dream Land, Kirby was 20cm tall. A Waddle Dee is about 30cm, Dedede, about one meter, Meta Knight, over 30cm (maybe 35cm, not sure yet), and Sweetie Void, about 50cm.

    By the time of The Forgotten Land, Kirby is 30cm tall, and Sweetie is about 60cm.

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  • 13 weeks
    Rewriting A Sweetie Dreamland

    I'm going to start to rewrite A Sweetie Dreamland, essentially to change the verb tenses. I'm also going to change "Dreamland" to "Dream Land", maybe change a few lines here and there, and so on. I don't know how long it will take, but I think that I should be done before the end of February.

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Nov
14th
2019

Original Bosses Pause Descriptions. · 6:38pm Nov 14th, 2019

Here are all the pause description I have imagined for the original bosses of my story A Sweetie Dreamland. I know people love those. And I love those too. Of course, there are some of the bosses that don't have images to accompany their descriptions. Maybe one day. I'm not really good at drawing, and I only have Paint to work with.
Note that the bosses are in chronological order, and since the pause description only appeared from Kirby Super Star Ultra, then any original bosses that appeared before the Revenge of the King mini-arc won't have a description.
This post will be updated as more original bosses are fought.

Revenge of the King

Kirby versus Sweetie Belle

Description of Sweetie Belle from Kirby's POV:
Second in command of King Dedede, and Kirby's best friend. But right now, she's the last obstacle before the king himself, and she won't let friendship get in the way of her duty! Time to face a fellow warrior and hero!

Description of Kirby from Sweetie Belle's POV:
The hero of Popstar braved King Dedede's army to come here, and now, he's ready to face the king himself. Time for Sweetie Belle to see how far she has come in this clash against her best friend!

Duel Against the King

Sweetie Belle versus King Dedede

The king could be considered as Sweetie Belle's master and father figure. He accepted her in his castle, trained her, helped her start the path to become the warrior and hero she's today. Has the student finally surpassed the master?

Triple Deluxe arc

Kirby, Dedede, and Bandana Dee versus Sweetie Belle (and Spikezilla, Yin-Yarn, and Taranza)

Phase 1:
Under the influence of Taranza's hypnosis magic, Sweetie Belle wants to do battle with Kirby and his friends. And she can count on the help of some powerful allies. The summit battle to save a friend starts now!

Phase 2:
The revitalised filly overflows with power after suffering defeat at the hands of Kirby! Kirby's best friend, and her two allies, have had their limiter removed, and the filly now swings four giant axes around with ease. Three heroes versus three fighting machines!

Phase 3:
Taranza's magic is pushing Sweetie Belle's body far beyond its limit! The filly is now a god of fighting that nothing seems to be able to stop! But how long her body will resist this boost? This fight must end! Stop, Sweetie Belle!

Duel Against the Knight

Sweetie Belle versus Meta Knight

Once known as the strongest warrior of Popstar, he lost this title to Kirby. But the masked knight remains a powerful opponent, constantly training to improve his skill. He's the next step in Sweetie Belle's journey to keep her promise. Can she take it?

Planet Robobot arc

Star Armor

This is the superior version of the Invader Armors, directly commanding the others in this invasion. Armed from head to feet, it will stop any form of rebellion. Time for those invaders to learn that they invaded the wrong planet!

Screwcko

Kracko has been mechanized to become the guardian and main source of power of the Weather Tower. Armed with a powerful eye-laser, and boosted by the tower, he will unleash the wrath of the sky on Sweetie Belle.

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A giant robot created in the image of Sweetie Belle quickly built to face her. The ten cannons are actually independant robots following it.

HAL O.V.E.R.9000

The Haltmann Works Company's secret weapon. A mysterious cloaked robot with a rather charming voice. What is hidden under its cloak?

Nightmare Clone

DNA was found in the middle of a huge crater on the moon, and this imperfect clone of Kirby's first real bad guy is the result. This wizard with a mysterious past tried to plunge Popstar in an eternal nightmare, but Sweetie Belle fought far worse since then. It's now his turn to face his worst nightmare.

Army of clones

Annoyed at Sweetie Belle's victories against his clones, HAL unleashed all the clones in his possession, revealing many villains of her past and some strong rivals. They now all have a common goal: destroy that filly and a certain puffball.

Star Allies arc


THE MOURNING SPIDER
TARANZA

A strange purple heart corrupted Taranza, and the spider now attacks Sweetie Belle. What is the meaning of this? The queen must now save her subject! The poor guy already has enough in his plate...


PRODIGY PAINTER
ADELEINE

The dark heart turned Adeleine into a crazy painter wanting to turn Popstar as a twisted painted version of itself! It gives a strong sense of déjà vu... But now, the Star Allies must fight her along with her many creations of paint.

ABOMINATION OF DARKNESS
PAINTED MIRACLE ZERO

Boosted by the power of the dark heart, Adeleine has been able to create a painted fusion of Zero Two and Miracle Matter, giving birth to this abomination even more powerful than the originals. It must be destroyed!


Darkness Incarnate
Gooey

The friendly Dark Matter has been turned back into his original self by a dark heart, and with its power, he will plunge Popstar in darkness. The most powerful Dark Matter in existence now faces the heroes.


Prince of Thieves
Daroach

The charismatic leader of the Squeak Squad is a thief of honor, but because of a dark heart, he wants to get all the treasures of the world for him and only for him. Armed with Necrodeus' Staff, he's now a dangerous foe.


The Lone Swordman's Shadow
Dark Meta Knight

Dark Meta Knight is already someone who doesn't love company. And with his thirst of fight and his goal to become the strongest now unleashed without restriction and control, he's ready to slain every creatures that cross his path.


The Cosmic Jester
Marx

Making others suffer is now his idea of having fun. As he spreads pain and torment all over Dreamland, his laugh echoes like the bells of the apocalypse. He will not laugh for long!


CEO of Neo HWC
Susie

She wants to follow in her father's footsteps. With the dark heart, a little too literally. Now piloting her new Business Suit 2.0, she's ready to show the power of technology.


Master of Magic
Magolor

Seems like he absorbed some of the powers of the Master Crown before it was destroyed. He's now the most powerful mage of his clan, and he's ready to show it!


The Most Powerful Warrior of the Universe
Galacta Knight

After countless years sealed in a crystal, this being of great power is ready to prove that he deserves this title! The only known being more powerful than him is his own father, the Dark God.


Aeon Hero
Galacta Knight (Light)

Master of the four Matters, Galacta Knight can use them to boost his power. In this form, he uses the positivity in them, becoming the hero who helped save the universe from his own father. Now, with the little positivity that remains in him, the real battle begins.


Aeon Calamity
Galacta Knight (Dark)

Full of hate and anger, Galacta Knight uses all that negativity to become more powerful than ever. Sweetie Belle must now face the very form that almost brought to its knee the greatest civilization of History.

Final


Father of Monsters
Grogar

The first tyrant of Ancient Equestria banished to limbo by the legendary hero Gusty the Great has returned after millenia to take back his throne and to spread terror to the world. Thanks to his Bewitching Bell, he can drain anybody from their magic, so nobody can stand against him. Nobody... excepted a certain filly.

Final Fight:
Sweetie Belle's POV:


Hero of Popstar
KIRBY

Hero who saved the world and the universe more than once. Son of the God Void and Sweetie Belle's best friend and best rival. Will he be the victorious of this awaited fight?

Stella Knight
Kirby of the Stars

Using a trick from his big brother, Kirby uses the positivity in the Matters to boost himself far beyond his limits. His abilities are now Super Abilities, and his speed and strength are now godly. A future God is in front of you.

Kirby's POV:


Heroine of Popstar
SWEETIE BELLE

Hero who saved the world and the universe more than once. Ex-second of King Dedede, now Queen of Floralia, Great Master of the Four Matters, and Kirby's best friend and best rival. Will she be the victorious of this awaited fight?

ARCHMAGE OF THE VOID
QUEEN SWEETIE BELLE

-Sweetie Belle finally shows the result of her training! Master of the Four Matters, she will remind you why she's your greatest rival and the second greatest hero and warrior of the Dream Universe

-Thanks to her powers, Sweetie Belle has learned to use others' powers as if they were hers. Now, she sends the full power of the King and the Knight against the Hero.

-Nightmare, the first real threat. Now, his nightmarish powers are part of Sweetie Belle's arsenal.

-Nobody knew what Dark Matter's arrival announced, or that his dark powers would now be used by your best friend.

-The jester who made a real celestial mess. Thankfully, Sweetie Belle is saner than him... Right?

-The most feared of Void's creations, father of the Dark Matters. Despite all he did to her, Sweetie Belle now uses him to reach her goal.

-Death didn't stop Zero. Even now, he still haunts you. But you became much more powerful since then, so no reason to fear him!

-It's hard to say if Dark Mind was the mirror counterpart of Nightmare, of Zero, or of the two. One thing is certain: you're now facing him again.

-The first of the Painting Sisters turned crazy by a monster. She couldn't be saved, but at least, she's not forgotten, as Sweetie Belle is proving right now.

-He threatened Pop Star in the past only to be trapped in a chest before being definitively defeated rather easily. And here is Sweetie Belle making a better use of his powers. Some could almost pity Dark Nebula.

-The living knitting needles who wanted to conquer Pop Star only to hit a white-furred wall named Sweetie Belle. At least, it was a good try. And now, their powers is in good use.

-The fearsome leader of the also fearsome Skull Gang, powers now in service of the one who killed who was called the God of Death.

-The real enemy wasn't Magolor, but the Crown. It was so powerful that, even now, Sweetie Belle isn't able to fully reproduce what it could do, which is very nice, thank you!

-The vain queen of the insects that ruled the sky who was given her eternal beauty sleep. A sad reminding that not everyone could be saved. Her successor now pays her homage.

-The responsible behind Drawcia, Paintra, and Yin and Yarn's corruption. When used seriously, his colorful powers are redoubtable.

-The greatest supercomputer of the universe reactivated by Haltmann. Big error... It's reality manipulating powers are only surpassed by one other being in this universe: Void.

-The Creator himself, father of Kirby. Thankfully, Sweetie Belle isn't as powerful as him.

-After going through all your main enemies, Sweetie Belle finally unleashes her full power. Time to end this!

Resolve of a True Hero
Sweetie Belle Soul

-Wanting absolutely to surpass the Hero and keep her promise, Sweetie Belle unleashes her Soul, making the battle reach a new scale. She doesn't control herself anymore, so be careful, or the whole planet could be destroyed!

-Thanks to a great control of the energies, Sweetie Belle Soul can use them to create copies of everybody and to control them to attack. It's like facing all your previous foes at once! But that's nothing, right?

-Stopping playing with the copies, Sweetie Belle Soul now goes close and personal, sending everything she has to finally be victorious. But you can count on your abilities to turn the table against her.

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-Sweetie Belle Ascended to become an alicorn while in Soul form.
Good luck...

True Final Fight: Versus Sweetie Belle Soul (Alicorn of Void)

-The chances of victory are almost null. The only way to defeat her is for her to recover her senses. Thankfully, Sweetie Belle doesn't master yet her new powers, or else, she could just erase the universe with a thought and be done with it.

-Sweetie Belle Soul has totally lost control and is causing the universe to collapse! Time to use Friendship to knock some sense into her before it's too late!

Comments ( 29 )

Random thought: when was the last time you saw a knee in Kirby? I'm not convinced that they're common enough for Dream Land to have that phrase...

5173042

when was the last time you saw a knee in Kirby?

In Star Allies: Adeleine. Humans live among the people of Popstar, so I'm sure the expression spread to some places.

I bet the second to last battle is Kirby, because even an overpowered Kirby wouldn't have THAT many phases!(except Void, but he was already defeated/befriended.:scootangel:)

5200073
Who says Kirby will be the one having all those phases in this fight? :trollestia: Look what I did for the first Kirby vs Sweetie Belle during the Revenge of the King mini-arc.

5200091
oooooooooooooooooohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh, yeah that makes much more sense.

5200091
It's actually the Triple Deluxe fight that did multiple phases. Revenge of the King did something different... but not mutually exclusive.

Oh boy, Kirby's getting a new form but leaving Sweetie room for a third?

5211056
*Cackles like a mad mastermind*

Hero of Popstar
SWEETIE BELLE

Actually, the feminine form of hero is heroine. So it would be "Heroine of Popstar."

5211295
But at the same time, English doesn't require you to use the feminine form of words that have them, even when the recipient is female. Because why should languages make sense? (Answer: because exchanging information is literally the entire point of language, you proto-British nutcases!)

5211061
Need any OC bosses? I have an idea for 5, though the first four are under the control of the fifth. Once Sweetie beats the first 4, they join her as elite soldiers in her kingdom. Interested?

5286176
Not really, sorry. The story is already almost over, and then, there will be the sequel that will happen out in the multiverse.

Hey, dude.
Got a question(not related to this)

5399390
Do you like Star Wars?

5399394
Yep. I like it a lot!

5399395
Then you’ll like this fic
https://www.fimfiction.net/story/480173/star-wars-the-equestrian-saga-the-phantom-menace
Comment what you think about it in the fic when you read it

5399395
Are those two more phases!?!

5412577
Well, as you saw at the end of the chapter, the fight is not over yet. It just went from "Kirby vs Sweetie Belle" to "Keep Kirby alive against Sweetie Belle Soul, and try to ensure that nobody is killed and Pop Star isn't destroyed on the way".

All I got to say is wow. The bosses from the Kirby game series were awesome. We came a long way from Nightmare to Sweetie Belle for Kirby and then King Dedede to Kirby for Sweetie Belle.
Also a question; I want to make story for the CMC, but I don't know which Nintendo game to put one of in, do you have any suggestions?

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Any Nintendo game would work. It all depends of what you want. For example, if you want a story of science fiction, then you can send a CMC to the Star Fox universe or the Metroid universe (the last one would be more mature even if the Star Fox one also can have some dark stuff). If you want one centred on adventure, then send them to the Zelda universe. If you want one more turned comedy, then the Mario universe would be perfect. War focused? Fire Emblem! Some slice of life? Splatoon could work for this. Maybe a bit of survival with Pikmin. Etc...

Humm, seems some of the pictures broke. Such as the last two for Sweetie Belle, and Adeline's. Otherwise I think the flavor pause text is pretty spot on!

5648638
The last two are because the DeviantArt account that made them disappeared. For Adeleine, that's because I can't find an image of her looking evil.

5648639
Ah dang, that kinda bites...but maybe something could be done for the Sweetie Belle ones. Who was the original uploader? Maybe I can find a copy of the pictures elsewhere.

5648717
It was Angel Midnight, but I don't remember what was the name of her Deviant Art account.

5648789
Ah...well, if they're on here, why not follow up with them?

5648799
I didn't want to bother her. :unsuresweetie:

5648800
I'm not sure if it helps but their DeviantArt account was https://www.deviantart.com/angelmidnight123 unfortunately not much shows up on Derpi or Twibooru, and The Wayback Machine wasn't of any help :unsuresweetie:

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It's really sad. Their art was good.

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