quick update on Sweet as Honeydew

Update most likely coming this Sunday.

Now, I've made a decision something I've been struggling with when I wrote the start of the chapter: In essence, unlike with To Be a Breezie, the sequel will not remain locked in a single perspective. it is simply too restrictive with Honeydew's perception of the world, not to mention the fact that there are now more characters as well as things that I may want to happen while Honeydew isnt even around. took me a while to make this decision, but here you go.

Comments

[Universal Librarian]

This seems like the opposite of a bad thing!

[Obsi]

5130498
who implied it was? It was just a hard decision

Edit: I like your avatar ^^

[Universal Librarian]

5130500
My bad, just particularly interested in seeing other ponies' reactions to Honeydew.

Also, thanks!

[Viper Pit]

I hope to see honeys reaction to seabreeze

[Kamen-Zero]

Seems like a sensible decision to make. I can endorse it.

[Obsi]

5130541
just sort of scary... I didnt even realize it myself, but in every single story I wrote so far, I remained in one perspective from start to end. so this switching perspectives thing, that is completely new to me XD

[Kamen-Zero]

5130542
Well, you can always keep it to one perspective per chapter.
That seems more do-able.

[Obsi]

5130551
that would not work. I do want to give you Honeydews perspective sometimes still. He will be the only one who is written from first perspective though

[Kamen-Zero]

5130552
Oh okay, that makes sense.
Well, I wish you luck!

[Obsi]

5130588
you too! whats on after Escapades of Escapism?

[Kamen-Zero]

5130598
Currently working on my own big fan-fic, Finding Friendship.

But if you want a comedy, I've been thinking of doing something based on the Untitled Goose Game.

Thanks for the fave, BTW!