Question about my writing: could there be more flavor text?

Eyyyy.

If there is one thing that can keep someone down it is yourself. I’m back in the groove in writing, but when I was writing the last and the current one I’m doing, it’s easy to question myself with my style.

What I want to ask is COULD there be more unique exposition? A character’s dialogue is different from exposition, which in my eyes, don’t need as much work as the latter.

Just trying to improve and ask a fellow reader what they think.

Freak, out.

Comments

[Vanitas]

There could always be more, but I think you are doing perfectly fine right now.

I know how much "easier" it is to make dialogue, than exposition.

[FerociousCreation]

5066969 Right, because characters have their own unique vocabulary.

[FerociousCreation]

5066969 Alright, thanks