Friendship Cup Revisions

Chapter 4 "One Day of Peace", Chapter 6 "Stoic Challenge", and Chapter 11 "Battle Break" have been revised to rewrite Twilight's scenes, 4 and 11 moreso than 6, to adjust her characterization to be more sociable and intellectual, and less cold and arrogant.

I'll also note that I had posted a comment on the story discussing criticisms some have made about the story. Hopefully anyone who has concerns with the story's quality may find some answers in that response, or perhaps not.

I thank everyone for reading and supporting this story and will do my utmost to write it to the best of my ability continuing with it.

Comments

[zimmerwald1915]

to adjust her characterization to be more sociable and intellectual, and less cold and arrogant.

That is completely out of character for Twilight Sparkle, in any incarnation.

[Moka Mcdowell]

If that what you want

[DrakeyC]

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If I didn't want it I wouldn't change it