General Updates · 11:27am Oct 27th, 2018
First of all, I'm not gonna say my mom is fine, but she's doing better. Still hurt and we'll be starting physical therapy soon, but dad and I still aren't comfortable leaving her alone for too long. I've got a little more time to write, but not enough for the stories you're all hoping for. However, so that these next few weeks aren't completely dead air, I'll be posting a few thing that I've already finished, starting this coming Monday.
Additionally, it's once again time for me to crowd source my writer's block. As pointed out by one of my editors, a lot has been done to play up the carnal side of things, but there's more to a relationship than that. There needs to be more emotional bonding, somethings to show everybody/pony letting their hair down and speaking openly. The idea suggested was to have Luna bring a prepared speech to the harem for peer review, trying to balance professionalism with avoiding legal jargon or needlessly fancy terminology.
Problem 1: I don't think I can write a sufficiently fancy rough draft and would appreciate if you guys could point me to some examples.
Problem 2: I have no other ideas for what else to do. All ideas will be considered.
Thank you for your time and patience.
Glad to hear that your mom is doing better (hope she gets well soon), sorry that I can't help with any idea stuff.
Good luck though.
It seems like Thomas has had very little one on one time with Silver. So maybe something exploring their dynamic.
Or possibly a side story about Thomas and Moon expanding their herd .
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Not just little time with Thomas and Silver, was there vary much time with Thomas and Surprise? Or Thomas and Honey, maybe have Thomas and Honey talk about Plow wanting to have a go with Thomas and why Thomas isn't okay with that, as in from how he was raised and who he is as a sort of learning each others cultures kind of way, or with Thomas asking Honey how the worshiping Alicorns goes for Luna when she was gone for so long and when she works directly for her.
(Will return here if I have any more ideas.)
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The herd is scheduled for later, but right now I'd like some specifics on things for them to do.
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Hmm. There's potential in that. Thank you.
Wish your mom the best.
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Appreciated
Earlier on Celestia mentioned Thomas not really interacting with her outside of shared meal times between the two harems, maybe have a chapter or 2 with Thomas and Celestia just discussing the differances between cultures or something?
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Hmm. There might be something there.
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Alternatively letting talon join them for some time in Thomas's dreams could be interesting.
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I've started a few dream stories already, but they're set to be super long. Mass Effect and Skyrim. Talon coming back to join in on dates however...
I was re-reading the story (yes its that good) and I had more ideas;
I'm only at chapter 61 in my re-reading, but was Blade Grace ever revisited? She had a date with Moonlight and I don't remember anything coming from that.
Was ERROR forgotten about or just not yet relevant again?
more role play
Once again I will return here again if I have more ideas and just let me know if you don't want me to.
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Ideas were had with Blade Grace, but they just never came to fruition. I do have plans similar to her purpose with a new character, but I doubt she'll ever come back.
Error will make a return. I've already written two scenes for it, but they're set way off in the future, one during Discord's return.
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maybe something with Thomas and Twilight's letters?
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Also an idea that just never went anywhere.
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well I seem to be just great at picking those out.
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Kinda. My writing is very stream of consciousness with very little in the way of structured plans. I go in with only a rough idea of how I want a chapter to go and, ideally, the story just carries me from there.
Maybe Luna needs to do a diplomatic trip to another nation and the herd/harem goes with her?
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An idea around that has been swimming around in my head for some time, but it's yet to properly surface.
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maybe it could even be Griffonstone and Talon could go along to see old friends/family.
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Im now back to the part talking about Griffon clans and feel it would be even more interesting to meet her family or see if she would be allowed to do so since leaving the clan.
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I'll let it stew over night and see what happens tomorrow.