May
28th
2018
Hey, guys! Next chapter is about ready! · 1:31pm May 28th, 2018
I don't think it's completely ready, though. As always, I haven't really done much editing yet, and I'm a little on the tired side. Been taking care of my baby while I've been writing, so there's that. He's such a quiet kid, though. Only really fusses when he's hungry or getting changed.
That being said, it would be a huge help if you guys took a look at it, as I'm most likely going to miss something. Thanks a ton in advance! I really appreciate your input!
No significant errors that I could find, but the chapter seemed to be nothing but setup. I didn't feel like it actually went anywhere, just revved up the engines then came to a full stop.
4871557 That's kinda what I felt too. Thinking of adding more, but I'm a bit on the tired side. Can't think of more atm.
4871557 Okay, I've added almost 1900 words. Please read it again, and tell me what you think.
Left you some minor notes about typos, plus some corrections.
It looks great so far. Will this be the final published version, or you'll be adding more content to it?
4871783 This will be the published version. Not going to be adding anything else to it, so thank you for taking a look!
I love your tags there. xD