Blep About Edits

So, like, I just have to get this out there.

I'm not satisfied with how Zipporwhill Assassinates the Princesses came out. As mentioned in one comment, it's rushed. It's okay, passable, but I can do better. That's why I'm rewriting it. I just didn't feel right not to say anything.

There won't be any sweeping changes, mind you, just technical stuff. Some characterisation might change, scenes will get more details, more jokes, more words in general - as is true for anything I edit.

I'll probably keep the old chapters, or unpublish them, or put them somewhere else. I don't really know yet.

Comments

[Train wreck]

It will be fun to see the reboot and revise of this story.