[Geoverse] Part Seven Progress!

I've finally tore myself away from World of Warcraft and Factorio for long enough to get cracking on the changes to Part One of the next Geoverse Story, Evil Rising. I've added about six hundred words (give or take a few) to the first draft, which hopefully makes it scan a little better.

If you are interested, you can click here to check out the second draft. I will gladly accept any feedback you can offer me; I want to make this story a good one, in order to make up for forcing you to wait so long for it.

Take a look, and let me know what you think (preferably via PM, to avoid spoiling it for anyone who doesn't want to read it before it's published properly).

Thanks for your patience.

Stay awesome.

Comments

[Whinifree]

I’m a slave to wow too! But luckily it’s that time in the current expansion that all I’m still interested in is the raid.

Write on. Write on! (Wish me luck in that same endeavor)