Apr
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2017
Deferential Peace - Final Chapter Released · 6:48pm Apr 17th, 2017
Hello Everypony-
I just received the all clear from the patron to publish the final chapter of Deferential Peace. It's possibly not everypony's bag of oats, but I found the story to be an interesting challenge. It's one more for the books, so thanks for checking it out if you do 
There's still more in the commission pile, and I'll be ready to take on the next project - which is a major shift in a completely different direction - soon. I do so enjoy the challenge of a new idea!
Be well this spring! 
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WishyWish · 318 views
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#commission
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#minotaur
#griffin
#diamond dog
#clop
I know you haven't been receiving much praise for this story so I just wanted to let you know I immediately followed it and looked forward to every chapter, checking every day for an update. I admit I do love these types of stories so long as they don't pass that very thin line that leads into full-on discomfort and unreadability. I think you masterfully treaded that line. I know that this was a commission work so I don't know if you would like to do these kind of stories on your own time, but if you did I'd love it.
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Ah, don't worry about it. As I've said before, it was a commission, and when I'm writing a commission, my primary concern is pleasing the person who paid me to write a story for them. The patron was happy so that's all that really matters. The plots of my commission stories are either contrivances designed to meet the goals of what the patron wants for the story, or laid out by the patron themselves beforehand. In this case it was the former, but I only take personal credit for the writing style and quality. When you don't see the 'commission disclaimer' at the top of one of my stories, that's when the plot is mine too
I welcome comments both positive and negative on my stories, but I'm not a fan of empty praise or empty criticism. If somebody can give me good reasons for why they did or didn't like something, I can totally respect that, because you really can't please all of the people all of the time (nor should you try). The only negative commentary I tend to dismiss are things that either have nothing to do with the story at all (I hate this and I hate you, emo emo etc blobber) or comments that show the reader either didn't read the story at all, or didn't understand the basic tenants of it. I avoid sharing my opinion or voting on things I have not read or do not 'get', because I feel that's hurtful to the community, as my commentary or vote would not be 'real'.
At any rate, I'm glad you enjoyed it. I don't tend to write non-con of my own accord outside of RP, but I do have a few stories that (I'm told anyway) count as dubcon.
4501821 Thanks for the response, this was my first time commenting on a story so I didn't expect a response, especially this soon so thank you. Keep up the good work I'll make sure to follow any new stories that come out from you and check out your old stuff. I really like your style.
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Well, you commented on a blog technically, no?
Thanks very much, I'm happy that anybody the time spent looking at anything I produce!