Quick Message · 9:29pm Apr 15th, 2017
For those who read the original version of chapter 4 today, just a heads-up that I've added a new scene to the chapter. Many readers mistook what was happening or were confused. Rather than letting people be confused and upset for a whole week, I've added an additional scene to the chapter that was meant for publication next week. Hopefully it will clear up any confusion. Sorry everypony!
I doubt anyone would be "upset" for a whole week. Confused maybe, but not upset. Still I am quite happy to see the extra long chapter now.
Also I started learning esperanto just for this story and I love it.
Didn't find anything confusing about it, though maybe the two week time-skip was a bit out of place since we were still getting to know the characters. Guess I'll have to read it again.