Old Chapter Reformatting and General Clean-Up of Errors · 10:20am Oct 17th, 2016
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There are some small inconsistencies, grammatical errors (mostly comma splices) and other little things I've noticed in the earlier chapters of Fecundity. They're bugging me, so I'm going to be going back and fix 'em.
Of course, nothing is actually going to change in the story. This is just some formatting and clean-up. (And yes, I know there will always be errors, and there's nothing I can do about that. I just wanna fix the stuff I can see.)
Doing this takes more time than you'd think, as it involves going through the story with a fine-tooth comb. I'm only one guy, and with some serious physical limitations, it takes me a bit to get it done. Right now, I've gotten the first four chapters fixed up, and I plan to get to the rest of the story as soon as I can.
Chapter 17 is currently 2.5k words. Expect lots of Gleaming/Spike fluff, Twilight Velvet and Night Light being quirky, and shameless catering to pregnancy fetishists.
Stay tuned.
Thank you for the update, and good luck with the muse.