Derp Small Edits on ECQ&tAE 23 · 7:59pm Sep 22nd, 2016
I made a bit of a derp with Ebb Flow's speech at the end of 23. It was way too harsh. If you read it before the time I posted this, have a look now b/c well... Ebb is prickly but not an arse.
The reason I write is because I want to read a story written for myself. One day, I want to read one of my own stories and say to myself "That is the best story I have ever read."
I made a bit of a derp with Ebb Flow's speech at the end of 23. It was way too harsh. If you read it before the time I posted this, have a look now b/c well... Ebb is prickly but not an arse.
You also might have made a small mistake with AJ's scene, as you had "Rarity" looking back at the Minotaur.
4221674 Got that one XD