May
16th
2016
I promise chapter six is coming along. · 12:07am May 16th, 2016
Currently the chapter comes in at 10k. I thought about releasing it where it's at right now, but I think it needs at least one more scene after the one I'm currently on. My PPSEFF (Pre-reader Proofreader Sometimes Editor Friend Forever) said a couple things that made me think about the pacing, and I decided the story needs to be sped up a bit, so the next chapter will see things moving along faster than they have.
Also, my PPSEFF said a part of the chapter could do with me being a little poetic, so look forward to (or dread) that.
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3954532 Yush.
3955071 I realize that recommending it to be a bit more poetic is not very helpful advice, especially since I haven't taken the time to elaborate or provide examples or anything. Only a few days left of the semester, though, so hopefully I can take some time to focus on important things after that