Damn good [NSFW] · 4:27am May 11th, 2016
Had one of those writing sessions where I wasn't too sure I'd manage much, but then all of a sudden I was getting into the scene and... Well... I had to take a break. Then I continued writing. And writing... And writing.
1,600 words in one sitting for Chapter 20 of What They Expect to Give not too bad if I do say so myself. You guys will like this one.
EDIT:
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HMMM. What were you guys expecting? Noodz?
What are we expecting?
Tell the truth not much. I'm expecting Rainbow Dash to come up with an excuse for Fluttershy for she could investigate with Twilight and Applejack. While Rainbow with them, we'll get little pieces of what wrong between AJ and RD.
If it not that...
Then I'm expecting another scene of Rainbow and Fluttershy almost getting to home base. But with you being a huge teaser, will stop it before they actually get to the good stuff. Of course in another word... sex.
If it none of those, surprise me or all of us. Like you've been doing.
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Oh ye of little faith.
What's more important. Your jollies, or my creative vision?
...Naw but really. I think it's been pretty clear from the start my fic had bigger goals than smut.
And anyways, I like my lemony scenes. So what if no one scores? Half the fun is the foreplay.
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.... Also, the last bit I added under the edit wasn't even referencing my story, but the tons of people who are clearly clicking on this blog post simply in search of mindless clop.
I mean hey, if you want something snappy, by all means, read Megapone's stories or something. The girls just confessed their feelings in my fic for crying out loud. There's nothing realistic about having wild sex on the first night, at least for Fluttershy. It's not my job to cater to your pent up sexual frustrations. Just saying.
... I'm dedicating the next sex scene to you. The author's note will read: "To sneakpeak. Please stop whining."
To sneakpeak. Please stop whining.
Oh you hurt my feeling. Hmm now that you mention it... I did seem to be in the aggressive side for a full sex scene...
Naah.
I really don't care about the sex, this story could have been rated T for all I care and I still would have like this story. The drama between Rainbow and her dad. Fluttershy sorta hatred toward her job. Sunset shimmer mysterious life. And of course what I'm waiting for what will happen when Fluttershy discover Rainbow was using her? Can't wait. I just gave my opinion of your question. What are you expecting? So I answered your question.
However, the best part a sex scene dedicated to me between Rainbow and Fluttershy. It not even my birthday yet. I will be honored. The whining part, eh go ahead I really don't mind. Though I got to work on that. I didn't even know I was whining. So thanks on pointing that out. I'll stop, though that going to be hard when I don't even notice I'm whining. Still I'll try.
So on, keep on doing your stuff. Your really good at it.