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Yoni


Some men just want to watch the world burn. Me? I'll be standing at a safe distance with a marshmallow on a stick

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  • 110 weeks
    The Elder Brother - A final Goodbye

    Hello friends, I bet you never expected this post, did ya. Yeah, I should have done it a long time ago but now I officially pull the plug on this, and all my incomplete stories. I had moved on, and no longer write in any capacity, so I figured it would be cruel of me to hang onto this false pretense that I might come back, it ain't happening.

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  • 230 weeks
    The Elder Brother: reincarnated - part 3

    So I finished going over a few more chapters and created an organized document with bullet points about how the future of the story will shape up, so I won't do stuff on a whim with no rime or reason anymore. Also after finishing the seventh season of MLP and briefly going through the chronological order of the world's history, I can safely say that there is no way, no how I would be able to tie

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  • 230 weeks
    The Elder Brother: reincarnated - part 2

    Hello guys and gals, just wanted to give you a bit of a progress update. I've redone the prologue and the second chapter of The Elder Brother. Just to be clear, I didn't rewrite the entire chapters, it was more of a "face lift" so to speak. I've changed a few words, removed and added paragraphs, and overall improved the quality of the chapters. I've also renamed the chapters "Act one - growing

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  • 231 weeks
    The Elder Brother: reincarnated

    So remember how a few years ago I gave up on writing and even gave some of my stories to other people? Welp, a day ago I became really inspired about The Elder Brother and politely asked for it to be returned to me.

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  • 318 weeks
    Sooo... yeah...

    I haven't died yet... I just moved on. I barely write anymore although when I do I still write new mlp stories. I feel guilty because whenever I visit this site amd see that two more people starte following me they're just gonna be disappointed

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Apr
3rd
2016

Am I disappointed? Naw... · 5:47pm Apr 3rd, 2016

So recently I tried to get 'The Filly and The Boy' into The Good HiE group, but unfortunately I did not passed as the story was claimed to be "plain, predictable, and unoriginal".

So, am I disappointed that I didn't make it? Nope. I mean, sure it would be nice to have one of my stories in this 'prestigious' group, but honestly, if the story was turned down over how it was intended to be, then no, I'm not disappointed. I never meant this story to be anything other than a sweet, light-hearted story.

Now why am I telling you this? Because I want you to be proud of your stories. They are your stories, you made them, they are the reflection of your hearts and minds, every story can be potentially great, just like every good story could have been botched beyond recognition. The difference between a good and a bad story is different for each and every one, and even if only one person understand this from what I said, I consider my work here fulfilled

EDIT: The sequel to this story is at 3500+ words and still going strong

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Comments ( 9 )

Who vetted your story?

3845757 It does not say, and besides, does it really matter?

3845760 It doesn't. That group to me is just a bunch of pretentious idiots who think they have and are the standard for all the HIE fictions on this site. You know what? You story might have been all those things but I liked it.

3845786 It's fine. I don't mind having a group that claims to have only good stories, but I also won't be devastated if my story does not get approved, and I definitely won't change it to fit into their standarts of good

Forget those guys I say we start our own good HiE group with blackjack and hookers :moustache:... On second thought forget the blackjack :rainbowlaugh:

While I haven't read that story yet, I see this kind of blog post every so often and I can never figure it out for the life of me. There's some good stuff in GHIE, no doubt. Some of my favourite people here post there. There's such an amazing amount of complete garbage too, though. Like, say, this one:

https://www.fimfiction.net/story/50802/what-happens-in-terraria

Yours can't possibly be worse. I mean, wow. I've read and enjoyed some really bad stories here, but that one is genuinely horrible. Still got into the group, though. I can't for the life of me imagine what kind of quality standard they're actually looking for, but "being good" sure doesn't have a lot to do with it.

3872172 They actually say it in the GHiE group that even if a story fulfills all their demands it can still fail if they personally don't like it

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Well, there's always an element of personal taste, so that's not something I'd blame anyone for. Otherwise, though, I'm really getting the impression that it's more about how many of the group's admins you're friends with than anything else.

3872260 I suppose, but like I said in the blog post, I won't change my writing style to suit some random bloke's taste

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