Update: The Price of Smile · 11:06pm Mar 7th, 2016
I've finished a thorough edit and update of The Price of a Smile, and I have submitted the work to Equestria Daily. This is my first fanfiction submission.
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If they like it, they like it; if not, not. It's all good.
Good luck!
...When did you finish? O.o I literally just read that today!
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Literally right after you read it. Chapter by chapter I was right behind you, in all likelihood.
Nothing major changed, but I did edit pretty fiercely. The main thing I can think of that was substantive was that I made Twilight's discomfort with Luna's sexual advances a little more explicit in the last chapter. But mainly the writing just improved.
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Oh, good. I was confused by that in the moment, but it didn't have any lasting impact, so I kinda forgot about it.