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LightningSword


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Jan
24th
2016

I don't get it . . . . · 6:26am Jan 24th, 2016

Fast as lightning, sharp as a sword

CONSIDERATION ------------------------------ 37 likes, 175 views

Topic that actually means something, character developing, emotional

WAITING FOR SUNSET ---------------------- 237 likes, 2,244 views

Smut with some emotion


It's like the only thing I write that people care about anymore is clop. Nothing else gets enough attention . . . . :fluttershysad:

Report LightningSword · 648 views · Story: Consideration · #Consideration
Comments ( 24 )

Give it time, my friend. This latest story was just approved yesterday whereas "Waiting for Sunset" has been up for 2 weeks now.

I agree with 3708772. Leave it for some time and I'm sure it'll blossom. Stories are like flowers, it needs time to grow.

Don't feel bad. At least you have so many people reading your stuff, even if it's just smut they only care about. I've been here for a few years and none of my stuff gets attention, but I still write anyway because I enjoy it.

Just keep believing.

3708772 they'll come around. Consideration was one of the few fics I've read that could be put into the show and have it be better for it.

I know the feeling. Sometimes it feels like there's no reason for writing when you put that much thought into something only to have your one shot smut fic get all the attention even if it was horribly written. My stories suffered from such at the beginning but later they became more well known so just keep trying my friend!

You're not alone!

Hey, if nothing else, you touched 37 people with your work. That's 37 more than I'll probably ever have.

Sorry haven't read your new story yet I was catching up on some stories I had missed, I'll start reading it right now.

3708804 I know you can get that same number if you try. There's talent in you that you just have to unlock.

just give it time bro, you just put up consideration. Waiting for sunset has been around forever compared to that. It was good, I betaed it, remember? It was good, it was touching, and that is all that matters, not everyone is in here just for the smut bro! we are here, we are willing to be one the few who stand out from the crowd no matter what. In the end, it is you who must decide, will you write YOUR fics? or will you allow others to Dictate what you write?

I'm just gonna be blunt here... your being kinda whiny.

Yes, I'm still on your side. Its rude that people just laugh at you. But you have to understand that some things people like more then others. Heck, my fics(on a different site) have views, and the ones I write about personal loss either get read or aren't read. What I'm trying to say is, some people will click on some things more then others.

It might have to do with the genre, or it might have to do with other stuff. I honestly don't know. I'm just trying to tell you that its not the best idea to be depressed about it, or the flamers will pounce like starving wolves.

I've had it happen, trust me.

My second or third fic on here: It was trash. I based it off the phantom of the opera, and after a few days, it had several dislikes. 9 or 10 I think. I edited it, asking 'whats with all the hate, guys? At least comment.' Two days later: 40 dislikes

I edit again saying 'ok guys you could at least tell me what I'm doing wrong please stop hating'

About a week later(I had to leave my computer behind while going somewhere else) 60 or 70 dislikes

Really, people will read what they want to read. My first fic here got absolutely trashed with hater comments.

Honestly, people on this will be more likely to read fics that contain clop or steamy moments rather than the emotional and sad fics. It's kinda like YouTube in a way.

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3708817 Fine. HERE'S a better example.

Or THIS.

Or how about THIS?

All have been around way longer than "Sunset". All of them way more meaningful. All of them are far lower-rated.


3708818 ^^^ Still think I'm being "whiny"? :ajbemused:


3708804 Don't give up. You have a chance to mean something. Whereas I will always only be judged by my mistakes rather than my successes.

3708868 in so far as I see it... People just have poor taste. And I wouldn't worry about me. Being a writer just isn't for me. I'm not worried about it. I'd much rather read than write anyway.

It's kinda simple really, people prefer that kind of that steamy kind of stuff because they'd prefer more "happier" fics (for lack of a better word) than get all emotional

Empty lust. That's what's consuming so many people's hearts these days. Empty lust. They don't care about emotions or character development anymore. Yeah, it's sad, but I wouldn't worry about it. :applejackunsure: If that's the way the world wants to be, that's their problem.

3708868 Some people have a lack of desire for good-quality stories and instead, satiates it with the dark side of a person's mind: Lust. Don't worry about it too much because a lot of people here can clearly see your talent in writing, the use of character development, etc. and in my opinion, they're just missing out on the good bits. Besides that, keep it up and going.

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Ok, wow. That was just uncalled for. I tried to tell you that some things get clicked on. I don't know what makes people decide that. One of my works that isn't even complete(And its a oneshot) was posted earlier then I would've liked and yet it has over 200 views. And an earlier work, a super sad work(Who am I kidding, their all kinda sad, I'm an angst writer for Celestia's sake) only has 34 views.

My very first work, which has been on that site the longest, has 36 views.

In order of posting, they are:
1. 36 views
2. 56
3. 186
4. 145
5. 183
6. 110
7. 34
8. 61
9. 147
10. 218(the is the incomplete oneshot)
11. 12

As you can see, people will decide what they want to click on. Please don't attack me for stating that you're being whiny. I'm only telling my opinion. Also, you gave us several links to old stories that are meaningful, and pointed them out to me, yet I said nothing about how time would get it more views. So yeah.

3708948 There probably is, but I couldnt think of it last night. Probably cause I was tired, considering it was 11 or 12. I don't know. :/

3709491 What was uncalled for? When I called you a name or said something cruel? I did neither of these things. You were the one slinging labels. Maybe I am being whiny. But writers tend to do that when the heart and soul they put into their work is ignored in favor of horse porn.

3708868 Hey, I would like to point out that next to sunset, Attachment has over 130 likes, and pride of the Apples (Personal favorite of mine so far) Has 82 likes. Id say that those are pretty good statistics bro. While, yes a good majority may only like your Steam Pieces, there those of us that love deep stuff as well.

On another note in regards to the most recent blog from ya, I dont give a Fuckin, flying shit out of a rats Ass about any down votes MY Comments get, and im sure there others who share my views. Let the Haters, trolls, and the FFP come after us. we'll send the with big FUCK YOU and a Double one finger Salute!

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Jabbing at me when I'm only stating what I believe. Thats what. Also, you aren't really inspired to write something unless your heart is in it. I've written 11 works on that site(actually, sixteen, five of them never made it past draft stage) and the eleventh work is kinda about my personal life.

And it gets 12 views. So yeah, you can't decide what your readers read. I, for one, didnt follow you for the Steam collection, I followed you for the phantom pony of the everfree. I have literally never read any of your stories except for the ones featuring Nocturne. OK? Ok.

Goodbye. While making this comment I went into a bad mood because of something in my personal life and I'm signing off now before I saying anything offensive.

3709865 That's probably for the best. I'm not in the best mood right now, either. Let's stop before this gets ugly.

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Yeah, I don't like fighting. See you later, Lightning

I know. It's just how things are. Smut is hot and other stories are not. Kinda sad really.

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