The Price of a Smile (Update) · 3:18am Dec 26th, 2015
I've added a few key sentences to the fourth paragraph of the last chapter. The story was missing an explicit description of why The Price was significant, and I think this makes the meaning of the story much clearer.
Thanks to the many readers who encouraged this change with detailed feedback, and to horizon in particular (who is a normal pony, so please go back to sleep).
Cool! Will reread.