I was looking for some editing help on my stories, including the next chapter of Asylum, and I was also looking for some feedback on the stories in general to help me nail down some pernicious issues I've been facing.
Please PM me if you're willing and able to help. And let me offer my thanks ahead of time, because I do appreciate it all!
So, years ago I actually started writing out a guide of random but mostly useless information about Asylum and Broadhoof after I received permission from folks to write fan-fiction based on my fan-fiction. It was a humbling but invigorating experience. So in my exuberance, I decided that I should craft something that would help provide the reader a more coherent world for their shared narrative.
Working on chapter 9 now, have up to chapter 3 edited. Looking to have maybe 3 more chapters, so it should all be wrapped up by early next month.
Graduate school has sucked up my time (and my writing ability) like nobody's business.
As for Asylum - have about half the next chapter written, but it's on the backburner till this project is finished. Consider it training during the off season so I can finish Asylum strong next year.
I don't get it?
I loved Doug.... Even the second season.
I don't see the similarities.
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3585503 I don't either, really.
I don't see a connection between the two.
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Same.
....... You JUST noticed that they were humans hwo were Technicolor like Doug NOW?
...... I am suddenly unsure if you really are the one who wrote asylum right now.
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Look here, it's probably where he got the idea.
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.... oh.... OH!
I see it now.
Whoa...
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Someone shared that link with me. As soon as I saw the title... my head was blown.
I mean even the stupid names match up. Pinkie Pie? Patti Mayonnaise?
Eh? Eh?
3585545 It's been YEARS since I've last seen Doug, so I'm in no place to comment about the connection.
But you do know that mlp has had names like that since G1 right?
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3585536 Okay, thanks.
...Well, I see your point, but I think you're really reaching.
Either way Equestria Girls was written by a monkey with it's snot; and Hasbro gives Megan McCarthy credit in an attempt to make her look bad.
.....I see no resemblance.
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Oh I know I am, but that's what I find so amusing - that and the fact that somehow it took this long for someone to draw attention to the idea.
How goes your current projects? Think you mentioned not wanting to post anything till you get it all caught up behind the scenes.
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Working on chapter 9 now, have up to chapter 3 edited. Looking to have maybe 3 more chapters, so it should all be wrapped up by early next month.
Graduate school has sucked up my time (and my writing ability) like nobody's business.
As for Asylum - have about half the next chapter written, but it's on the backburner till this project is finished. Consider it training during the off season so I can finish Asylum strong next year.
3593485 gotcha