Create your own Mary Sue or Hunter to be featured in "Wrath of the Harbinger"! · 8:50pm Oct 15th, 2015
Hello everyone. If you followed the link I have set in my story then you reached this blog. Here, you can submit your totally overpowered original characters. They don't even have to be alicorns. Or alternatively, you can create your own hunter and join in the fun of helping put an end to the tyranny of Mary Sues everywhere. The only rules? The Mary Sue must be totally OP and you must be fine with them most likely getting gruesomely murdered, because that's the point. You can also send in characters that aren't necessarily hunters or Mary Sues, they can just be regular ponies (or other creatures) fighting the good fight, whether that be against the Mary Sues or for Equestria. As a general rule, hunters only get two special abilities (called loadouts in the first chapter) so keep that in mind.
Also, I'm going to say this now and I completely forgot to add it in the first time. Hunter OCs will get less screentime but other characters will likely get more screentime, particularly Mary Sues. Also, don't be surprised if I don't respond immediately, my laptop doesn't want to work at times. Also don't take it personally if I don't feel like a submitted character can be fit into the story if I decide not to use them. I'll send you a PM if that is the case and thank you for your contribution but I will also send another PM if I change my mind later down the road. I also recommend reading the story, or at least some of the first few chapters, to understand that a hunter shuts down a Mary Sue's powers once they get within vicinity. This meaning, if one Mary Sue occupies a universe, and a hunter occupies that same universe and it's just them, that Mary Sue's OP abilities are deactivated unless there's more Mary Sues around. However, any 'natural' abilities will work.
If you want certain characters to have more screentime and whatnot, send me a PM and we can work something out. Also send me a PM if you have questions.
Spread the word about this story.
Edit/s:
Submissions are currently closed for now. I have enough characters to use in the Mary Sue department. Well-thought out hunters might still be considered, however.
Also, I prefer if people actually use their creativity to make a character for the story, likely something akin to a blank slate that I can use, instead of submitting a character already created. The reason for this is because I'm constantly worried about writing your character... incorrectly.
I'll join your little fun Idea. Here's someone you can use for your story.
Name: Questoa the Mad-Blooder
Species: Flying Naga
Image:
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ally with: The Mary Sues or Hunters (I'll let you decide who he should join because it is your story)
Personality: This video will give you a glue
Hobbies: Killing, killing, playing the flute, and going on a rampage to kill more people.
Dislikes: Things he cannot kill, people telling him to not kill things and bunnies.
Likes: killing, watching gladiators in arenas, bat ponies and the colour red and black.
Motto: "Kill! Kill! KILL!!!"
OP powers: Uncontrollable Berserk, blind fury and to heal wounds in mere minutes.
Another's request: if you want to make some changes, go ahead. This guy isn't gonna be shown in my stories, so you can have him
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Thank you for the submission! This guy will definitely be featured.
3503631 Awesome!
Almost forgotten
Height: 8'7
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Thanks, again. And don't forget to spread the word about this story, if you want to.
Count me in.
Name: Kul'as
Species: Multiversal Demon
Appearance: th00.deviantart.net/fs70/PRE/i/2012/309/5/1/the_dark_lord_by_prpldragon-d5k1uxy.jpg
Ally with: Hunters (arch enemies with the Mane Six but puts aside their differences to kill all the Mary Sues.
Personality: here's a hint
Hobbies: torturing Tirek, trolling the mane six and Princesses, killing ponies other ponies hate (hoped for a parade from killing Blueblood)
Dislikes: annoying songs (I.E. It's a Small World After All) Mary Sues, Tirek, Sombra (for being so lame)
Likes: killing, MirrorLuna( evil Luna from Reflections arch of comics who is his girlfriend), torturing Tirek, Luna in general, ponies in socks
Motto/quote: "If it's OP, shoot it until it's dead, then take the treasure they drop."
Height: around Princess Celestia's height.
If you wanna make some changes, please PM me first please
Hmm... okay, I'll give it a shot.
Name: B.T. Cynical, AKA, Bright Tomorrow (Cynical is the now dominant personality)
Species: Unicorn
Appearance:
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Alliances: Hunters, Manehatten Mafia, Channel Pony
Personality: Rude and arrogant, but incredibly jokey. Has no moral qualms with killing, stealing, or basically any crime unless it is sexual in nature, or hurts children. In such cases, he will track down the culprits and brutally murder them in his basement, as he does with all who wronged him or his allies.
Hobbies: Reviewing, cracking jokes, and raising his adopted son turned adult, Raging Seas.
Likes: Murdering his enemies, making jokes, being at the top, power
Dislikes: Anyone who ever wronged him, criminals, natural milk, and running out of bullets
Motto: "Hello, I'm The Cynical Brony, and I review it so you don't have to!"
OP powers: If need be, he has a large knowledge of black/dark magic and demonic deals to dispatch of his enemies. Can also recover completely from killing injuries once a day, though he becomes incredibly vulnerable after the spell wears off and leaves him as normal. Said process involves a massive explosion that destroys anything and anyone within a 10 foot radius.
While he is the main character of my series, I've explored AU stories before, so go nuts.
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Thank you both for the contributions. I'll see if I can find a way to fit them into the story.
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3579327 thank you. Consider the story now tracked.
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Those guys sounds like the type of people my guy would hang out with... Or kill depending which side the author chooses him to be on.
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If you need more hunters or Mary Sures OCs, just let me know and I'll create some more for you.
3595587 Kul'as is more of Chaotic Neutral but a prick
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You can submit/make as many as you want. Though if you want him/her to be a hunter you should look at the first chapter that talks about loadouts, each hunter is limited to only two loadouts. They're special skills.
Is it alright if I submit my OC?
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It is indeed. Either post it here or we can talk in PMs.
3595666 My one's a bloodthirsty berserker who loves nothing more but to kill things and drink their blood from their skulls.
You're point being?
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3595883 I answered the PM you sent
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I was aware of this yes, thank you for telling me!
Are you still taking requests for characters? Because I've got an OC for a Hunter and another that I can convert into a Gary Stu, if you're interested.
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I'm always taking requests. I just won't always include them in the very next chapter. I want to make it flow into the story well.
You aren't going to use these pics, are you?
MUMMSTANG THE EVER ANNOYING!
Occupation: Villain Sue
Normal Form: MUMMSTANG
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"ANCIENT SPIRITS OF CHAOS! Transform this ancient form to MUMMSTANG THE EVER ANNOYING!"
Transformed Form:
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Hobbies: Plotting the downfall of do-gooders, turning good ponies into evil ponies with black magic and offers of limitless power (now where did I leave that Alicorn Amulet and Inspiration Manifestation. Ah, it's right here by the Necroclopicon), spreading darkness around the world (Are you listening Nightmare Moon?) because sunlight sucks, otherwise turn the world into a lovely desert, replacing all natural food in the world with mushrooms (they grow in the dark and they are the perfect food!), mock heroes that try to stop her in vain, gloat behind the monologuing shield while telling everypony her perfect evil plan, prove to the world she's totally evil and... HEY!! STOP STARING AT HER ALICORN FLANKS BUSTER!!
Powers: When destroyed or her plot defeated, she goes back to her own dimension to lick her wounds and plot her next scheme. Because she is several dimensions away from Equestria and Discord's home, no magic from Equestria or Discord can stop her from leaving. This includes Elements of Harmony and the Rainbow Pony Forms. She can even teleport home after being turned to stone. Yes, this is PLOT ARMOR (how else do you think she comes back every week?!) Any parts of her body removed/destroyed will be fully restored by the next encounter.
She also has the power to make anyone else act (more) noble and heroic. This usually happens by the fact the pony opposes her (or after she's double crossed someone she's given power to). See DELIBERATELY BAD EXAMPLE.
Combat Magic: Even her smallest combat spells posses the power to vaporize a city block with a tap of her hoof. She can use any elemental attack as long as its black and red in color. She can obliterate cities with a small phase (FUSS RO D'OH!!) and large islands with a poem (which probably sounds cool in Japanese:
"Thou who art more chaotic than chaos,
Thou who art deeper than even this plot!
Drifting upon the Sea of Chaos,
Oh, Golden Lord of Chaos!
Hereby I call to thee,
Hereby I swear before thee!
Those who would stand against us,
All those who are fools,
By the power you and I possess,
Grant destruction equally upon them all!
GIGA SPAM!")
Corruption Magic: She can twist the bodies and minds of the weak willed in order to make them more evil. This can be as simple as turning a sweet loving pony into a selfish sadistic brat or turning a puny pony into some monster like a Chimera. The change can be dispelled or the victim can be talked out of it (Fight this!! This isn't the pony that you really are!!)
Also, she can flash teleport at will (*BAMF!!*), use illusions to impersonate another pony of any size (including voice and smell),
She can summon an ARMY OF MINIONS once a day, a MONSTER OF THE WEEK once a week as well as call upon an ARTIFACT OF DOOM from her endless vault in her home dimension.
Mary Sue enough?
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Yes. Yes, very much so. I will also use the pictures unless I'm not supposed too (as in, they're neither of ours for our own personal use) I also recommend reading the story as a reminder that once a hunter gets in range (range being an entire universe if it's just one hunter and a Mary Sue) they shut down Mary Sue powers.
3630172 I ask because I claim no rights to either picture. I just found the best ones I could find to give you an idea of what she looked like.
Oh, and things like PLOT ARMOR and DELIBERATELY BAD EXAMPLE are separate things from MARY SUE. So the hero will have to be creative about taking down MUMMSTANG THE EVER ANNOYING!
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I'll most likely use her, just not in the next chapter.
3630499 Yay!
Shadow The Bloodedge
Age: 14
Power: blood sword linkin park limp bizkut ninja, can kill the pewdiepie h8rs and get girls 2 liek hem. He also can teleport behind anybody with twin katanas and say "you fool!" even 2 god.
Likes: Minecraft, linkin park, slipknot, limp bizkut, pewdiepie, sonic, masturbating to furry porn on deviant art
Dislikes: Females, the outside, social interaction, anybody with a different opinion of him
What he does: Kills h8rs and spams dank memes on reddit while wearing an athiest fedora
Looks: Ninja cloak with linkin park t shirt and dual katana holders and big muscles. He wears emo chains and a fedora with a scarf and glasses.
ps u cant kill him because he is a descendant of goku and naruto who fucked them also and was the babies, so he can kill anybody and is invincible and can go super sayain
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I should let you know that I have Aspergers so I unfortunately can't tell if
is you being serious or not. So tell me now so I don't get confused please. Thank you.
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Wasn't being serious in the absolute slightest about any of the comment I posted.
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Thank you. I might use this character in the future. Who knows.
Here, I will create the ultimate Mary Sue. It is a red and black alicorn that knows Kung fu and can come back to life three times. He is the son of sombra and chrysalis and generally does not give a shit about what's happens to equestria. He has a bad habit of monologueing out loud. Has weekly attempts to capture the Chrystal empire. Can control changlings and uses lumps of liquid iron as minions.
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I will use this concept. I'll obviously have to give this character a name and whatnot but I'll make sure I remember you.
3662336 How about, crimson heart?
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Thanks, saves me the trouble of having to come up with a name. I'm terrible with coming up with names for characters.
Fun Fact of the day #1: Anything that can successfully hunt and kill a Mary Sue is automatically granted Mary Sue status by way of being able to subdue a "perfect" character.
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Yep, this is indeed true. In fact, I was waiting for someone to point this out for a long time. And I write Mary Sues. I figured, why not. And that's what the hunters are, essentially. Mary Sues killing other Mary Sues, while taking orders from the leader of their organization, and why they're not allowed to go out into other universes while on-duty, thus having their anti-Sue powers on. Any time they are deployed without their anti-Sue powers, they're defenseless as well. I would say more but I think I've said enough. I want to thank you for finally pointing something like this out even though it was planned. Er, you know what I mean. Hopefully.
Name: ,
(yes, it's name is a comma)
Species: Unicorn
Likes: Blueblood, Diamond Tiara, Pinkie's parents, (all of whom she's seen killed because of Mary Sues) not having a name, living
Dislikes: People killing others for no good reason, edge
Physical Description: A dirty whitish color with a long curly mahogany mane.
Allies: Hunters
Personality: Quiet and emotionless- or seems like it. In truth, she cares very deeply about people. She hates to see innocents killed and sort of regrets killing others. She chose to be referred to as ',' because she didn't want to seem too arrogant.
Powers: Aside from normal unicorn stuff, none really
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I'm definitely going to use this. Could make for some interesting dialogue. I hope you read the story and have fun doing so, as well! Have a great day.