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Loganberry


Hold your ground but do not be unkind. (Ponyphonic, "Shy Heart") He/him. Ponyfic Roundup reviews every Wednesday.

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  • Sunday
    The never-ending stor(e)y

    For some reason this is one of the points readers of mine (including off-site ones) have mentioned several times, perhaps because it's one of those Transatlantic divides that isn't all that well known. So: when you're talking about the floors of a building:

    US English: one story, two stories. The same spelling and the same plural as for the other kind of story.

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  • 1 week
    Fics I reviewed in April 2024 (and one from late March)

    By popular request¹ I'm bringing back this feature. My weekly Ponyfic Roundup reviews are, and will remain, on my off-site blog. It just suits me to do it that way, even if I'd probably have got significantly more of a readership had I written the blogs on Fimfiction as most (all?) other current reviewers do. However, a

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  • 17 weeks
    State of the Unicorn: Poor

    That's poor in both senses, I'm afraid! Though before I say any more, I need to stress that I have a warm, safe home, enough to eat, internet access... the essentials, really. I am not in danger of losing those. However, I won't be doing much beyond those essentials for a while. Without going into boring details, I will very shortly be going in for dental work to be done. Which, as

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  • 21 weeks
    Happy Hearth's Warming Eve!

    I keep my online activity to an absolute minimum on Christmas Day, so I'll take this opportunity to wish all of you reading this a Merry Christmas!¹ However life has treated you over the past year, I hope it treats you better over the next. I shall be back to reading Fimfiction on Boxing Day!

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  • 25 weeks
    So then, Doctor Who

    Loved it! A few little quibbles, not all the acting from the newcomers was stellar and sadly parts of the gender-related stuff felt awkward and forced, eg "something a male-presenting Time Lord wouldn't understand", but I liked much more than I didn't. Plus one of my worries about the new Disney-cash-infused Who has been dispelled: this definitely did

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Sep
26th
2015

S5E16: Made in Manehattan · 7:30pm Sep 26th, 2015

Well, that was... an episode. Not a disaster, but nowhere near as good as last week's instalment. One or two nice references, but it was a story that the creators could do in their sleep these days. Actually, maybe they did, as it was rather lacking in energy. Hey ho. ★★

Spoilers beyond the break!

I only watched this a few minutes ago, and I can already feel large chunks of it disappearing from my memory. It was a real filler episode -- probably a good one to have on the day of the Friendship Games premiere, but disappointing in its own right. It was rather disappointing in its use of the Applejack/Rarity combo: they sparked off each other much more enjoyably in "Trade Ya!", "Simple Ways" and even "Look Before You Sleep". This episode was just... there. Any "Applejack's hat is a valued heirloom" fic plots, already holed below the waterline, have been well and truly sunk, though -- not a flicker as it was replaced.

Poor Twilight! Not only has she apparently read every book in existence (I actually have a fic in the early stages of development based on that premise!), it's looking increasingly as though she'll get a Map episode in the finale. Will she go with Fluttershy, though, or will 'Shy get her own friendship problem to sort out? Other things... the little montage was also fairly meh, nothing like as enjoyable as the "Hurricane Fluttershy" one, for example. The actor pony playing Charlty had a really weird accent. I was rather hoping the old pony near the end would turn out to be the real Charity, back for a visit -- sadly not; maybe they missed a trick there.

And yes, it was nice to see Coco Pommel again. It's just a shame that she didn't really get to do very much beyond react to what Applejack and Rarity were doing. This was Noelle Benvenuti's second MLP episode; the first was "Maud Pie", which walks all over her new effort. The repeated comment about the Sisterhooves Social surely has to be setting up a future storyline, though; having seen the episode title list, I think I could make a pretty good guess at which one it will be!

Also, Peanuts reference! Already been done in the IDW comics (Big Mac arc), but still fun.

Comments ( 3 )

Yeah, the informal Rarity trilogy ended on kind of a low note.

What bothered me more about the 'actor ponies' was not the accents but how stilted their performances were. It just seemed like bad acting and I couldn't work out if it was intentional or if the show cast just couldn't work out how to act thier characters acting in a convincing way.

I actually didn't mind the montage though, it had some of the more fun moments in the episode.

I think that this episode suffered more than most from a lack of time, as there was too much to do in a single episode: send Applejack and Rarity on their way, establish that Manehattan is an unfriendly place lacking community spirit (completely at odds with its presentation in Rarity takes Manehattan, but never mind), bring in Coco, introduce the problem (which doesn't happen until seven minutes in), then have Rarity and AJ fail to solve it, then have the actual solution. It's just too many plot points for a single part; worse than Magical Mystery Cure.

I agree to an extent, that this is rather an episode that is just there, rather than providing something substantial. Still, I enjoyed it for what it was, and it was great seeing Coco again.

And I need that fic.

Whoa, she wrote "Maud Pie"? How did this episode manage to go so wrong?!

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