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MrAlterad


A brony living in the states that really likes Fallout.

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  • 399 weeks
    Trioverse Vs Canon Changelings

    Spike is friends with a changeling named Thorax.
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    Spoilers...

    So with that episode, a lot of new information was given on changelings:

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  • 399 weeks
    Down Time

    Sorry for the silence and lack of updates for last few weeks. A lot of things were going on, take your pick:

    -Work was extra busy.
    -My love for Pokemon was reignited.
    -Latest WoW Expansion went live.
    -Been in a minor depression. (still am)
    -Lacking motivation to work on Teal Changeling. (lacking motivation on all fronts actually)

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  • 405 weeks
    Teal Changeling: One mooore thing!

    Regarding tags:

    Adventure: Chrys and company are seeing the world and growing for it, while facing adversity. While there are slice of life moments heavily sprinkled in, at its core, this is an adventure story.

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  • 406 weeks
    Teal Changeling Polish: The Second Half

    There was surprising little I needed to do to the second half of the story, compared to the first. There were a lot of chapters that were fun to read all over again. I’m really proud of 14, 19, and 21. Hopefully 27 will be on the same tier of quality.

    Nothing of note was added or changed in chapters 14 through 20.

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  • 408 weeks
    Teal Changeling Polish: The First Half - New Scenes.

    I've worked over half of the story so far, which means chapters 0-13 have been looked over :twilightblush:. I've added a few things. Tweaked this and that. Fixed big derps. All changes and additions are live, though there are bound to be grammatical errors in 7-13.

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Jul
11th
2015

Tantabus vs. Shadow's Flare · 10:41pm Jul 11th, 2015

And absolutely nothing changed.

All and all, that episode was delicious! I really loved the first half of season 5, and can't wait for the next half!

Report MrAlterad · 748 views · Story: Shadow's Flare · #Trio-verse
Comments ( 3 )

I still think you could utilize Tantibus somehow. You could probably have a similar entity for Celestia, though that's up to you. And this episode was okay to me. I loved Luna's struggle to accept the fact that what Nightmare did wasn't really her doing, but I found this particular episode had a lot of fan pandering and I didn't like that. But on the bright side I also thought there were some great pieces of animation this time around, like, whenever Luna went from dream to dream or when she was holding the dream together.

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I find it a little funny how Luna said that Celestia wouldn't be able to help with this problem, considering how it was resolved. Missed opportunity for Celestia and Luna to have a more expanded version of what happened after the mane 6 rainbowed Nightmare Moon in episode two, I guess.

Celestia in the Trioverse has a similar sense of guilt as Luna does in cannon regarding their actions in the past. You can expect to see more of that in Obsidian Heart, when I get to writing it. :twilightsheepish:

3229809 Sadly we're probably never going to see Celestia and Luna get to have an actual moment or episode where Celestia forgives Luna for what happens, especially if we're assuming five years have passed since Luna's reemergence. Although I find it strange that they decided to give Celestia no power at all within the Dreamscape. Also they could've written a great moment where the CMC explain to Luna why what Nightmare did wasn't her fault, and that probably would've held more meaning since she had those three episodes with Scootaloo, Sweetie and Bloomie.

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