So I broke one of the golden rules of storytelling, and it showed. Without excuses or explanations, I'm pulling it down, and going back to a previous outline of the story.
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So we're losing the changeling subplot? Aww.
And the Ragelestia. I did like this version of her. Mane like ashes.
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That idea will made into its own story. Which is what I was originally going to do, but then had the clever idea to shoehorn it into Tears.
Stories are subject many a revision, we are both blessed and cursed in this age that we can witness such changes in such short order
3127114 Excellent! Stand alone, or side-story to Tears?
I'm in the unfortunate position of being completely in the dark as to what the ending of the last chapter was. I was reading it during my lunch break today then got called away in the middle (Clower's friends had just arrived at his bedside) and was going to finish it when I got home. Now I'm lost!
This story was great! A beautifully characterized Celestia and Luna, an interesting mystery revolving around Clover's past (I was vying for him to not be human, I say while not even knowing your actual reveal
.) , plus a good bit of world-building (Love or hate it, Xenophilia did worldbuilding right). Add me to the list of people wanting to see more of Equestria's newest prince.
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Pm me if you want to see the removed chapters.
ooh, there was a second changeling chapter we missed?